Here's what most readers are worried about in this novel. 1-mc isn’t the only transmigrator. It's true. He's not the only one but MC's probably never meeting another one cause I did it just for background sake. 2- Every cliche you can think of is in the story(from tsundere to dumb mc) I know but it was intentional. I want to see them mature as the story goes and right now both of the characters you mentioned are 16. Most characters you'll meet are highschoolers as well so... 5- Mc is shallow and has 0 ambitions(previous life). I know. I made him to have no ambitions. MC's previous life was boring and didn't really meaning in it. Every aspect of his life is planned by the strict parents which is why he was doing whatever made him feel good(aka drawing) before he dies. Did I not describe his feelings enough? Let me know so I could add more descriptions in some aspects and write less about some. New readers, give it a try. You won't regret it and thanks for the one who actually wrote a review about this. You didn't need to delete it. I loved your criticism.
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What is this novel even about? I have not read it yet because the synopsis does not really tell me anything.
It's about a guy who died and accidentally travelled to a parallel universe due to his power awakening from his dad beating him up. Turns out the world he's in is a world based on one of the por* games. Moreover there's this AI inside his head asking him to sign a contract to become a protagonist of that world. You got it? Don't worry, I'm thinking of rewriting everything so it'll be easier for new readers to understand. You can see how inexperienced I am with writing an original novel from the conplicating sypnosis lol.
BreezyNovels:What is this novel even about? I have not read it yet because the synopsis does not really tell me anything.
