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2023-03-10 01:29

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Okay review time 560 chapters, i criticized this novel hard at first and Absolutely thought it was trash tier. writing quality was Horrible and alot of things just didnt add up. also if he needed it then he magically stumbles across it by the end of the chapter. Alot of useless chapters about rnadom characters or several drawn out info dumps because the chapters are so small you may end up with 5 straight chapters that you can pretty much skip if you wanted. Now this is where things change. every 10 chapters you can see obvious improvement so i continued to read. i enjoyed seeing the author gradually fix the mistakes and planning ahead. now mc mindset doesnt alter too much but it does change a little from influence around him but its not a 180 hero of justice all of a sudden, dude is still ruthless. i have to say the romance is absolutely sudden and didnt care for it at all with the main chick E** and just find it god awful honestly was hoping she would die off but E*** on the otherhand was way more drawn out and makes more sense throughout the story and seems like the right way to go kinda like he learned what it should be but couldnt fix it so tried again (atleast my opinion of course). there stays grammar mistakes but just a bunch of tiny things and very well eligible. the power concept is interesting and well done but here is my issue its not his original power, he doesnt forge a path with a unique soul even tho it is “unique” because turns out the strongest in the world had it first and he is just an heir to it. it gets old with the whole “im an heir to the strongest or i turn out to be the reincarnation of the strongest and i unlock my memories and blah blah blah.” After binging it in 3 days, I believe it has ALOT of potential in the later chapters and definitely has a good mystery to it and leaves you wanting the big answers and worth reading if you can struggle past the beginning, 7/10.

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