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DaoistqsoWie
DaoistqsoWieLv12yr
2022-07-30 07:01

I am writing this review after reading 410 chapters. It was good at first, I was wondering about the next evolution of mc, then the character Erza entered the story, at first I was not bored. Then she became mc's girlfriend. There is no problem with that. The story continues and I am not bored. Erza re-entered the story and I got bored. Erza was hooked on mc (and it really narrowed me down) and I got really bored reading these chapters. In short, I was reading this story because of the realism of the main character (for example, I don't read novels where mc is polygamous because it doesn't seem realistic to me and prevents me from taking the novel seriously), but after Erza came, the realism of the novel gradually disappeared. I could only endure this for 30 chapters and left the novel. (my native language is not english :)

Nameless King

Arlemit
4.6
1149 Chs

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Syphilitis
SyphilitisLv15

Question here, if im on chapter 560 and he has yet to get together with erza and spent the longest time running away from her until he was strong enough to fend her off then are you perhaps talking about eva the extremely annoying one and makes you just want to skip the whole chapter?

2yr
DaoistqsoWie
DaoistqsoWieLv1

It doesn't matter if she's with Erza. The problem for me is that Erza sticks to the mc. No need to be a fan, these episodes are really boring. (I haven't skipped a chapter in any novel I've read so far)

Syphilitis:Question here, if im on chapter 560 and he has yet to get together with erza and spent the longest time running away from her until he was strong enough to fend her off then are you perhaps talking about eva the extremely annoying one and makes you just want to skip the whole chapter?
2yr
Syphilitis
SyphilitisLv15

Ahh well the least i can is it get betters as the story goes

DaoistqsoWie:It doesn't matter if she's with Erza. The problem for me is that Erza sticks to the mc. No need to be a fan, these episodes are really boring. (I haven't skipped a chapter in any novel I've read so far)
2yr
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Spicy_Lasangua
Spicy_LasanguaLv4

I really like the book. The mc is smart and gets things done as efficiently as possible. Unlike some novels where when a third rate villain or annoying character appears, the mc doesn't just show his strength then let the guy go for him to say, "I'll Get you next time". No just kill the guy straight up and be done with it. Ahhh never seeing that annoying guy again. Satisfaction. Anyway really enjoy the book so far

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Arlemit
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Hello everyone! I hope you may give Nameless King a chance. This is a story about a world where souls give people special powers and change this dark and sometimes mystical world beyond recognition. Mc is cynical, cruel and in most cases acts in mercenary interests. Let's begin!

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DoubleCoN
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I think this novel is really amazing its quite unique and as you get further in you see how creative it is. I think this novel has lots of potential especially once you get past chapter 200. I think if the author keeps it up this novel will become very popular. I think the only thing holding the novel back is probably the fact that the author has a a lot of pretty popular novels on break which isnt a bad thing for me since I like the other novels he writes but for some people who spend lots of money it might seem like risk to invest gold tickets. I think if this novel goes further in chapters compared to his other novels by about 50+ chapters this novel will get a huge boost! Keep up the good work you have my suppprt your latest chapter describing races was really well done and I am so excited for more!🤩

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ARandomThingg2
ARandomThingg2Lv1

Overall, this novel is great, but I can't help feel its a bit rushed. When mc needs something, someone or something shows up and helps him get it. If mc gets a material and needs a blacksmith to use it, someone in the next few paragraphs will show up and have a job related to a blacksmith. Like i said, its a good novel, but the grammar needs to be cleaned up a bit.

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WeepingCarp
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gold! you wont be disappointed with this one 👍 just wondering why this novel is not that popular ? cuz this should have millions of views!

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Syphilitis
SyphilitisLv15

Okay review time 560 chapters, i criticized this novel hard at first and Absolutely thought it was trash tier. writing quality was Horrible and alot of things just didnt add up. also if he needed it then he magically stumbles across it by the end of the chapter. Alot of useless chapters about rnadom characters or several drawn out info dumps because the chapters are so small you may end up with 5 straight chapters that you can pretty much skip if you wanted. Now this is where things change. every 10 chapters you can see obvious improvement so i continued to read. i enjoyed seeing the author gradually fix the mistakes and planning ahead. now mc mindset doesnt alter too much but it does change a little from influence around him but its not a 180 hero of justice all of a sudden, dude is still ruthless. i have to say the romance is absolutely sudden and didnt care for it at all with the main chick E** and just find it god awful honestly was hoping she would die off but E*** on the otherhand was way more drawn out and makes more sense throughout the story and seems like the right way to go kinda like he learned what it should be but couldnt fix it so tried again (atleast my opinion of course). there stays grammar mistakes but just a bunch of tiny things and very well eligible. the power concept is interesting and well done but here is my issue its not his original power, he doesnt forge a path with a unique soul even tho it is “unique” because turns out the strongest in the world had it first and he is just an heir to it. it gets old with the whole “im an heir to the strongest or i turn out to be the reincarnation of the strongest and i unlock my memories and blah blah blah.” After binging it in 3 days, I believe it has ALOT of potential in the later chapters and definitely has a good mystery to it and leaves you wanting the big answers and worth reading if you can struggle past the beginning, 7/10.

2yr
Frostee_Flamey17
Frostee_Flamey17Lv4

I am reading "The greatest sinner" and I am quite hooked by your story. I can't truly assess this book since I only read 7 chapters but based on your previous work, you have a talent in making dark-themed novels.

3yr
EternalSolitude
EternalSolitudeLv4

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Middleclass
MiddleclassLv13

i have one and only problem with this whole problem is the MC feels like a dog of gisle & i hate that this is so cringe i feel like gisle is boss & mc is some kind pushover dog ... it's so annoying that you want to quit the novel ..if gisle was female lead i understand but he is dude why are you doing all this for him sending all important characters to him everything under gisle and what you r a dog who protects his master .. change it gisle have to die or change a title for nameless king form to nameless dog

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