Item: Danmachi~A new tale
Rating: 4
Author: Adrian_Putra_3580

Adrian_Putra_3580Lv13yr

2021-12-23 14:17

My opinion the MC is childish he glare at ottar(who could kill him easly) because he Don't speak 🤔 he not smart or cautios like a typical anime protagonist so i expected many of the mighty plot armor to save him i don't know if in the future he change it not problem for me hopely because he can learn from experience.and the last not least his system' is kinda stupid because a sytem who can talk back to his master is a flag a System must only do something if the the master ordered and do something if the MC is in danger and cannot command the system.oh and i hope he not a simp in the future(its Because he lost his mind when he see Freya it kinda a flag for me🤭😤) because if him a simp/naive/boy Scout who follow a girl order because she is preety and get wall over because she is sexy,let go someone who want to kill him because she is preety and not because something smart .🤮🤮. Its just my opinion don't be angry author 👌

Danmachi~A new tale

BlOoDDeMoN

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BlOoDDeMoNAuthor

Don't worry he will not do everything that Freya ask him too. And he will surely grow smarter in future

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Isak_SvartrapmoLv4

I hope this could be w wholesome mc x freya. give her some bs power or something in the next world

BlOoDDeMoN:Don't worry he will not do everything that Freya ask him too. And he will surely grow smarter in future

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Player550Lv4

Thanks

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