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finally a danmachi fic thats not with hestia or hepeastus familia and the most important thing is its not with bell or babysitting him finally a danmachi fic thats not with hestia or hepeastus familia and the most important thing is its not with bell or babysitting him

This story is honestly amazing i like how you make the system not all quest and he needs to train cuz I'm extremely bored with system that just controls the player and gives a ton of quest and it's a lot realistic cuz sometimes they make the items so cheap that it's laughable and you could make a inosuke template at season 1 max and then maybe after maxing it out you can make it that you need more points to upgrade it to like entertainment district arc inosuke this could also be used for other characters like Goku and it would start at kid Goku then teen Goku the Saiyan saga but it would be extremely from kid to teen etc

white hair, check. red eyes, check. system with a separate lifeform (aka personality), check. ok bye no thank you delete this + ratio + who asked + this is getting old I should take another month long break from these cliche fanfics ..............................................................................................................................................................................

I'm sorry I couldn't read it to where it is, I don't like that the system in the episodes has a conscience, although this point is explained, it irritates me how it explains things being that it knows about the situation of the mc, the mc, and its attitude is quite silly and I do not like it.

Honestly, it's not bad but has a lot of problems... and many choices that can make readers dislike it or hate it, writing quality is a solid 3 few grammar mistakes but the character interactions feels like everything is robotic/feels unnatural , world background is unknown I mean it's in danmachi but what year or maybe I missed it.

author said they are taking a break cause they have a lot of homework for the winter but hasn't updated for 8 months which is kinda sad I liked this

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