Item: Reversal
Rating: 2.4
Author: XKoa

XKoaLv132yr

2022-07-29 18:43

A very long winded story that takes 50 chapters to basically progress to nothing. Author describes things in detail adding way too much filler(in my opinion) Characters are very edgy and repeat things and do the same thing 3 times in a chapter. Honestly the idea is good but the execution leaves a bitter taste and a migraine

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