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2022-08-22 15:11

if u expect to find a relaxing and smutty read looking at the synopsis, then ur totally wrong.. the story is full of DRAMA and complicated stuff..i have crossed 100 chapters so far and tbh i skipped most of the details in the chapters as the reason i gave already, it was full of unnecessary drama.. the story may start which may make the mc look intelligent and always on control with the situations around him..but later he just turns into a sitting lamb being pushed around and beaten according to wishes of the bigger heads ,where the mc just accepts his fate.. i guess he would overcome it and make them pay for their sins in the future, but i couldn't continue further for now as it just got too annoying for me to bare..because I'm not really a fan of stories where they make the mc wait and suffer to only get their revenge years later.. i will remove this biased review once I get to know how it turns out in the end if the revenge arc satisfies me...i was just really tempted to submit all my one sided ramblings from all the annoying complications in a story where i wanted to njoy reading

Reversal

Eroos
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Eroos
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He will not be locked up easily, after all he has the support of one of the most feared organizations, if you read a few more chapters you will realize everything.

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Reveal spoiler

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BASTILLE
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Its mostly a tragedy filled novel with ultra slow-pacing, Mc is also mentally unstable. In conclusion, the novel hasn’t given anything the sinopsis hinted into. Now for those who like this type of novel i suggest you give it a try.

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I hope you continue the story, it has a lot of potential, seriously this story is very good...................................................................................

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IOnlyReadNTRHentai
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The Novel's idea is not new but most novels are built in the Japan or something like that. So it gave very fresh feeling. And second, I did enjoy this novel but I feel like it was wasted on the unnecessary moments. Since young I was cultivated by mom who seriously loves Korean drama so I also love drama and romance very much. But this novel is just too much focused on MC's psychological problems and drama between his mom. MC is really annoying on many levels and author already said that this would go on until 30 or 35 chapters which is extremely uncomfortable to deal with it. Reminder that MC is supposed to be an adult but literally he is worse than a kid from time to time. I don't understand why author is stalling MC's development. MC is supposed to be blessed with legendary 'Perfect Human ' being thing but I really felt like it was not at all. Maybe I was too soon to judge the novel. Well, this is my opinion.

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drunken_undrunk
drunken_undrunkLv4

[ Reviewed after 110 Chapters ] Some might contradict with my thought but for me this novel is one of the best I've ever read. I don't remember for how long I wanted to read a simple urban novel but I didn't find it and that's why I myself started writing a simple urban slice of life novel with an MC who doesn't have too op cheat. But then I found this novel and it became the top of my reading list. I just love this novel too much. A true gem. If someone knows anymore urban novels where MC is not too op then please recommend that to me. Plotline is great, Charcter Designing is great, Updating Stability is very good, World Background is best atleast for me.I only cut one star in writing quality as I find some minute errors even in the translated chapters. For example - he turned to she or some other minute mistakes. Other than that it is a gem of a story. Love it and can't wait to read the upcoming chapters. Keep going like this and it will become a game changer in the webnovel community. For the last words, at first I felt bored but as the story went forward I got glued to it and most of all, the ongoing and upcoming chapters are very....... intriguing.

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Earl_Silence15
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Sob...sob...This is a great book I've read without anything lewd. Especially the story its really good, i even want to say its the best but it will be bad to the other books I've read. This book is within my top ten, even though there some sad part, I won't be surprised that there will be fanfics just to save Ashley, because of how good this is. I don't know if what i wrote is understandable since im not good at describing but i give my full review hahahha.

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Milf_Supremacy
Milf_SupremacyLv11

I quite liked this novel. Keep giving more chapters. .

3yr
Legendary_Gear5
Legendary_Gear5Lv13

It seems to have decent potential my only peeve is that its too slow... yes authors like to hqvw character development and we readers like that too... just not 40 chapters worth of it and having only his first maturing moment its too slow for me tbh Maybe less inner monologue as this also really slows the progression aswell but aside from that i dont think it has many issues

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Wusse05
Wusse05Lv10

It's great so far, and I can't wait to read more when it is released. great work! this section is here so i can actually post this review.....

3yr
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