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BASTILLELv133yr
2022-01-05 06:33

Its mostly a tragedy filled novel with ultra slow-pacing, Mc is also mentally unstable. In conclusion, the novel hasn’t given anything the sinopsis hinted into. Now for those who like this type of novel i suggest you give it a try.

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Eroos
EroosAuthor

Everything that was hinted at in the synopsis, is something that will happen in the future, the protagonist is still developing, sorry for the delay, but I already warned from the first chapter that my protagonist would not be one more of those empty protagonists and without foundation in their actions.

BASTILLE
BASTILLELv13

Yes and in neither do you say that the Mc stays a kid for over 30 chapters or that he is mentally broken or that there is tragedy in the story. Its good writing just not what i expected

Eroos:Everything that was hinted at in the synopsis, is something that will happen in the future, the protagonist is still developing, sorry for the delay, but I already warned from the first chapter that my protagonist would not be one more of those empty protagonists and without foundation in their actions.
Eroos
EroosAuthor

it was warned in the beginning that in this novel, no one is immortal. also in the tags it says quite a lot, didn't you read where it says #Murderer and Gore? Do you expect it to be a children's story? While I understand that everyone has different tastes, thank you for giving my novel a chance, I hope you find something that interests you.

BASTILLE:Yes and in neither do you say that the Mc stays a kid for over 30 chapters or that he is mentally broken or that there is tragedy in the story. Its good writing just not what i expected
Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv14

u do understand English right ??? 🤔 since when murder and gore = tragedy ??🧐 they are worlds apart bro 😑😑 p s why not just admit that u didn't put tragedy tag and put it their 👎👎

Eroos:it was warned in the beginning that in this novel, no one is immortal. also in the tags it says quite a lot, didn't you read where it says #Murderer and Gore? Do you expect it to be a children's story? While I understand that everyone has different tastes, thank you for giving my novel a chance, I hope you find something that interests you.
Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv14

thanks bro for providing such curtail information that author just conviently forgot # tragedy many author do such things

Eroos
EroosAuthor

murder is not a tragedy for you? Do you know psychologists? you should look for one.

Sin_of_GREED:u do understand English right ??? 🤔 since when murder and gore = tragedy ??🧐 they are worlds apart bro 😑😑 p s why not just admit that u didn't put tragedy tag and put it their 👎👎
Eroos
EroosAuthor

no jokes. The truth is that I didn't think about the Tragedy tag. My mentality is somewhat simple, for me any scene that has to do with murder and gore is something tragic, but yes, it doesn't count the suicide, something quite tragic, my mistake. I will add it to the synopsis, thank you very much for the recommendation.

Sin_of_GREED:u do understand English right ??? 🤔 since when murder and gore = tragedy ??🧐 they are worlds apart bro 😑😑 p s why not just admit that u didn't put tragedy tag and put it their 👎👎
Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv14

Tragedy means that the plot is centered around a tragic event (or several interconnected events), very often the death of someone close to the MC. which is not good for mc and murder tag is just a sub tag which comes under a lot of tags like crime, mystery,horror,war, politics etc all these can have murder tag bro atleast google it before try to one up some and don't end up making a fool of urself infront of others now run along

Eroos:murder is not a tragedy for you? Do you know psychologists? you should look for one.
Eroos
EroosAuthor

I don't know why you state something so incomplete. Tragedy itself comes from a Greek term, a term that is used colloquially in all languages. Tragedy has different situations in which you can identify them, and it is known worldwide that a murder is already a tragedy. Now if you want to see the true meaning of tragedy in literary genres, the truth is that the word comes when you face against the gods, that was the Greek origin, and my protagonist... does not face gods, at least not in this novel. tragedy (from lat. tragoedia < gr. tragoidia, heroic drama). 1. n. f. LITERATURE A dramatic work that develops a serious or transcendent theme, in which the protagonist is swept away by a passion or by fatality. 2. LITERATURE Literary genre constituted by this type of work. 3. An unfortunate and disastrous event in real life *the death of his parents was a tragedy. catastrophe, misfortune*. 4. LITERATURE A lyrical composition lamenting unfortunate events. But I repeat, to avoid confusion, I took the time to add the label in the synopsis, I don't see why toxicity.

Sin_of_GREED:Tragedy means that the plot is centered around a tragic event (or several interconnected events), very often the death of someone close to the MC. which is not good for mc and murder tag is just a sub tag which comes under a lot of tags like crime, mystery,horror,war, politics etc all these can have murder tag bro atleast google it before try to one up some and don't end up making a fool of urself infront of others now run along
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Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv14

great looks like u did some googling but why defining what tragedy genre was during the Greek period except for the fact that you know how to Google well great 👏👏👏 u know how to Google 🤣😂 p s just how dumb r u ??? don't u even know the difference between tag and genre ?? from u reply u surely don't tag - refers to things/elements which might be in the novel genre - refers to the whole novels main focus example cus u so dumb that u can't understand romance tag - novel has romantic element in the novel romance genre -novel is about romance (didn't copy paste from Google like some dummy) so murder tag means simply that murder happens in novel it could mc how kills etc it doesn't in any way say that the novel has a tragic elements p s since murder is tragedy acc to ur comment than a crime mystery novel should be a tragedy novel right ridiculous 🤣🤣 p s u r saying why toxic i wonder how said since I think murder doesn't equal to tragedy i should go to a psychologist ? u reap what u saw bro well it was nice seeing your pathetic effort to cover that u were wrong good bye

Eroos:I don't know why you state something so incomplete. Tragedy itself comes from a Greek term, a term that is used colloquially in all languages. Tragedy has different situations in which you can identify them, and it is known worldwide that a murder is already a tragedy. Now if you want to see the true meaning of tragedy in literary genres, the truth is that the word comes when you face against the gods, that was the Greek origin, and my protagonist... does not face gods, at least not in this novel. tragedy (from lat. tragoedia < gr. tragoidia, heroic drama). 1. n. f. LITERATURE A dramatic work that develops a serious or transcendent theme, in which the protagonist is swept away by a passion or by fatality. 2. LITERATURE Literary genre constituted by this type of work. 3. An unfortunate and disastrous event in real life *the death of his parents was a tragedy. catastrophe, misfortune*. 4. LITERATURE A lyrical composition lamenting unfortunate events. But I repeat, to avoid confusion, I took the time to add the label in the synopsis, I don't see why toxicity.
Eroos
EroosAuthor

You think it's stupid to inform yourself by google? being the biggest source of information in the world. In that case it is also stupid to look for information by books, isn't it? And by god, what a dense guy, surely all your knowledge didn't come from some book or internet. If I put you copied and pasted examples is to give you a foundation/source for my words, but if you find that having a foundation is something mocking, it doesn't matter, ignorance is something normal. That aside, tags generally serve to describe your novel and make it easier for readers to find your novel with what they are looking for in a read, via #'s or the like. Now, they can be used by reviewers or the like, but this is not the case in my novel. Answering your question: *why define what genre tragedy was during the Greek period, except for the fact that you know how to Google it?*. I define it for you, because in your first comment you said :*Tragedy means that the plot centers around a tragic event (or several interconnected events). AFFIRMING that that is its meaning, when the true meaning is not that, nor has it ever been. The fact that the word 'Tragedy' is used colloquially to define an unfortunate event does not mean that it is well expressed. I could post 1000 sources for you to verify my words, but they are so focused on affirming your words and at the same time believing yourself superior within a web page, that you won't even take the time to read them. But hey, people like you with plenty of time to bust balls exist everywhere. As Aristotle said: The ignorant assert, the wise doubt and reflect.

Sin_of_GREED:Tragedy means that the plot is centered around a tragic event (or several interconnected events), very often the death of someone close to the MC. which is not good for mc and murder tag is just a sub tag which comes under a lot of tags like crime, mystery,horror,war, politics etc all these can have murder tag bro atleast google it before try to one up some and don't end up making a fool of urself infront of others now run along
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Lord_Shiva_
Lord_Shiva_Lv14

I'd just stop replying at this point, save yourself the headache and time wasted.

Eroos:You think it's stupid to inform yourself by google? being the biggest source of information in the world. In that case it is also stupid to look for information by books, isn't it? And by god, what a dense guy, surely all your knowledge didn't come from some book or internet. If I put you copied and pasted examples is to give you a foundation/source for my words, but if you find that having a foundation is something mocking, it doesn't matter, ignorance is something normal. That aside, tags generally serve to describe your novel and make it easier for readers to find your novel with what they are looking for in a read, via #'s or the like. Now, they can be used by reviewers or the like, but this is not the case in my novel. Answering your question: *why define what genre tragedy was during the Greek period, except for the fact that you know how to Google it?*. I define it for you, because in your first comment you said :*Tragedy means that the plot centers around a tragic event (or several interconnected events). AFFIRMING that that is its meaning, when the true meaning is not that, nor has it ever been. The fact that the word 'Tragedy' is used colloquially to define an unfortunate event does not mean that it is well expressed. I could post 1000 sources for you to verify my words, but they are so focused on affirming your words and at the same time believing yourself superior within a web page, that you won't even take the time to read them. But hey, people like you with plenty of time to bust balls exist everywhere. As Aristotle said: The ignorant assert, the wise doubt and reflect.
Villain116
Villain116Lv3

Both of u clam down XD

El_Tobi0999
El_Tobi0999Lv3

EnavoiG
EnavoiGLv12

Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15

I dont know a lot about tragedy, but this is a great drama 🤣

mox9
mox9Lv14

Wow, ummm i know it’s late, but author, tragedy in novels is specific to MC’s life. While gore, killing and those tags are theme and like mentioned alot in the story. This opinion is from observation only.

Sensei_8446
Sensei_8446Lv14

After this reply the argumenter should be done. Legit, y'all the novel is great so just chill mates. In the end life goes on. Ps: great drama

Eroos:no jokes. The truth is that I didn't think about the Tragedy tag. My mentality is somewhat simple, for me any scene that has to do with murder and gore is something tragic, but yes, it doesn't count the suicide, something quite tragic, my mistake. I will add it to the synopsis, thank you very much for the recommendation.
_Sky_Silver_
_Sky_Silver_Lv3

Fight! Jajajaja!!!

BAM_AMVS
BAM_AMVSLv4

so the tragedy doesn't mean mc willl suffer riight

Eroos:no jokes. The truth is that I didn't think about the Tragedy tag. My mentality is somewhat simple, for me any scene that has to do with murder and gore is something tragic, but yes, it doesn't count the suicide, something quite tragic, my mistake. I will add it to the synopsis, thank you very much for the recommendation.
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