Review Detail of Sloth_King21 in Naruto: Infinite Dream

Holy, a real review So thank you for the compliment. About the chapters being short, yeah, you are correct about that, but since there are only three days left for school for me. I'm a start making chapters longer. Well, try to, but my imagination can mess that up sometimes, and I don't have anything planned out; this was for fun, but I will try to do better; it's just I don't know what to work on since this doesn't get that many reviews. SO about the Itachi and Minato, I won't go too deep on it, but I will still talk about other characters since my character isn't the only one in that world. I want my character to fail and stuff he won't be perfect he will be betrayed his plans won't work, or he even might die Idk, yet I'm going with the flow, but if he dies, I think it was more realistic for me. About the Naruto thing, I see where you are coming from. I'm new at this, so sometimes I can't control my imagination and write some random stuff, but I think it was somewhat logical ik; he has root Anbu and Hokage thing, but the mc has that in mind I won't talk much about it since spoiler. Thank you for what you said ill definitely keep it in mind.

I understand. Especially with the time constraints. it's alright if the release rate is slower if the chapters have good content. Also a piece of advice. Flesh out a rough plan in your story before you write further. If you write on the go, you will leave a lot of plotholes and your story tends to be messy. Try to figure out what is the end you see for the story and then try to imagine your character in different Naruto arcs and what you want him to be. What are the lessons you want him to learn. Don't just stick to canon arcs. Growing other characters is fine. just make sure that you don't make it pointless info. Also please avoid the cliche MC powerup just before dying. A smart man would even kill a rabbit at full power. Going easy on an opponent and talking to much is for dumb arrogant villians. Keep up the good work. Your writing will improve the further you go. Cheers [img=recommend]

Thank you for what you said and i promise i wont do none of that he wont have no pointless power up, When i read reverend insanity i wanted something similar to them but im not good like them but ill try to make it realistic and as smart as possible but that will be limited since im not that smart.

It takes time and focus to write a story like reverend insanity. But try reading more Naruto fanfics. You might get new ideas which help you write. I'm glad you're open to advice. Please though, plan a rough storyline. I know you're doing this for fun but if you want to improve you have to plan the story line atleast to some extent. Because your character has the plot knowledge. If you don't plan it well then you'll make easy plot holes and people on WN can be very critical to borderline abusive and discouraging. Don't worry, just be creative and if you plan the bring in other elements do mention it's AU

Yeah ik the webnovel people are like that ive seen it and im prepared but updates will take longer now since im a be doing that and try not to make many plotholes

I have the ending and planned out kinda just dont knwo how to rough draft and stuff like thag im just going to search it up

That's good, quality over quantity. As long as your story quality is great, even if your release rate is relatively slow your good. And don't change your story for others. Correct your mistakes, even rewrite chapters if you need to but don't give into peer pressure. There are always going to be people who don't like your work even if it's great. Haters gonna hate.

Yeah you right thank you ☺️ somehow this gave me more confidence and motivation. if i get big one day on this ill remember you🙂

You're welcome. Also do remove the note chapter when you add a new chapter. It ruins the flow otherwise.

I alReady did