Yeah ill still do it but this is suprisingly hard. And me being lazy dosent help but i wont drop

Thx still working on the new chap since i wanted to be long and good

I alReady did

Oh yeah forgot

Lol i forgot how people think to much into a fanfic ok i guesss il correct that when i have time

Ok i guess if telling me im a child makes you feel like an adult then go ahead

Yeah you right thank you ☺️ somehow this gave me more confidence and motivation. if i get big one day on this ill remember you🙂

I have the ending and planned out kinda just dont knwo how to rough draft and stuff like thag im just going to search it up

Yeah ik the webnovel people are like that ive seen it and im prepared but updates will take longer now since im a be doing that and try not to make many plotholes

Thank you for what you said and i promise i wont do none of that he wont have no pointless power up, When i read reverend insanity i wanted something similar to them but im not good like them but ill try to make it realistic and as smart as possible but that will be limited since im not that smart.

OH ok i guess its already late but i can probably do something with that later on and try to see what i can do. Thank you for pointing out a mistake.

umm what where did you get that from?

lol, now that I read it my self it's kinda weird how does a woman have another baby after two weeks

Elaborate? and please, you think people care about how old someone is on a website...

Holy, a real review So thank you for the compliment. About the chapters being short, yeah, you are correct about that, but since there are only three days left for school for me. I'm a start making chapters longer. Well, try to, but my imagination can mess that up sometimes, and I don't have anything planned out; this was for fun, but I will try to do better; it's just I don't know what to work on since this doesn't get that many reviews. SO about the Itachi and Minato, I won't go too deep on it, but I will still talk about other characters since my character isn't the only one in that world. I want my character to fail and stuff he won't be perfect he will be betrayed his plans won't work, or he even might die Idk, yet I'm going with the flow, but if he dies, I think it was more realistic for me. About the Naruto thing, I see where you are coming from. I'm new at this, so sometimes I can't control my imagination and write some random stuff, but I think it was somewhat logical ik; he has root Anbu and Hokage thing, but the mc has that in mind I won't talk much about it since spoiler. Thank you for what you said ill definitely keep it in mind.

Sorry i wrote it wrong but i dint mean it like that pretty much shikamaru was born first and then after 2 weeks mc was born idk if that helped but she only held it in for 4 hours

Sorry no I don't like those I got bored of it, so I'm primarily sure no, but if you still stay around ill tell you if I do it one day, but it won't happen :)

yeah ill fix that later lol

You're a bot, right :( But if you're not well I will be uploading today

thx