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2021-12-13 13:09

This is pretty good by my standards since english isn't my first language. You can ignore one piece world but you will have some struggles understanding some of his powers and his harem members. All is good I just want so suggest that make the story longer like some arcs and worlds. Going to diff world and just speedblitzing it feels wrong to me afterall he is not exploring and making use of his time with his girls all he cares about is powering up and not enjoying time with them. I hope they are already pregnant tho it can increase his character development by a lot. His character is pretty decent not too shabby but can be improved in the future. The only problem i personally have is the story is too fast and it can destroy the development of his character and his wives are becoming side charac the only good thing i can see is that to not have a hard time he doesnt include all girls in his adventure like in solo levelling when they got there only ulti and yamato go first I understand that but atleast they should go together u know

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Mr_Pervert
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Like the suggestion. thank you

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