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king_Gurra10
king_Gurra10Lv143yr
2021-12-03 18:45

No clue why this story isn't popular but i think it's because slow chapter release but i still like the story and how the main character was born.

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Blood_stain
Blood_stainLv2

I think the synopsis was not clear, it kind of gives the impression of those cliche type fictions

Daoist423242
Daoist423242Lv12

I think because Some really hatE mcxhermione ficS, even i don’t like it. base on the synopsis i think the auThor will really make Herimoine the love interest so i don’t bother reading it

Novelenthusisat
NovelenthusisatAuthor

hmm.. is that so. but i won't be doing mc x Hermione.

Daoist423242:I think because Some really hatE mcxhermione ficS, even i don’t like it. base on the synopsis i think the auThor will really make Herimoine the love interest so i don’t bother reading it
Novelenthusisat
NovelenthusisatAuthor

😅 sry about that.. .i will change it when I get some good idea for the synopsis. I didn't want to give away the plot of the story that's why I wrote the synopsis this way.

Blood_stain:I think the synopsis was not clear, it kind of gives the impression of those cliche type fictions
Daoist423242
Daoist423242Lv12

So who will be his love interest author Sama???

Novelenthusisat:😅 sry about that.. .i will change it when I get some good idea for the synopsis. I didn't want to give away the plot of the story that's why I wrote the synopsis this way.
Novelenthusisat
NovelenthusisatAuthor

Isn't it obvious. .. she has already been introduced. Her plot will start after the events of first year ends. I will develop her character more. But if readers don't like her then maybe I may change the love interest. I have already gotten some comments saying that they hate that character but I think it's just a first impression. they will change their opinions when her plot starts and she gets some development. I hope you would like the direction which I will take the story. Because there are going to be massive changes later on.

Daoist423242:So who will be his love interest author Sama???
Daoist423242
Daoist423242Lv12

Okay i think i’ll drop it, there are too many mc x hermione out there.

Novelenthusisat:Isn't it obvious. .. she has already been introduced. Her plot will start after the events of first year ends. I will develop her character more. But if readers don't like her then maybe I may change the love interest. I have already gotten some comments saying that they hate that character but I think it's just a first impression. they will change their opinions when her plot starts and she gets some development. I hope you would like the direction which I will take the story. Because there are going to be massive changes later on.
Novelenthusisat
NovelenthusisatAuthor

this is not a mc x hermione though 🤨

Daoist423242:Okay i think i’ll drop it, there are too many mc x hermione out there.
Daoist423242
Daoist423242Lv12

Oh i thought it was Hahahahahahahaha.

Novelenthusisat:this is not a mc x hermione though 🤨
Tunic01
Tunic01Lv15

this isn't a harem right? I don't know why tf people think harems and HP go together.

Daoist423242:Okay i think i’ll drop it, there are too many mc x hermione out there.
Insane_Pumpkin
Insane_PumpkinLv10

Well i almost left thinking it's another of those idiotic chinese translation fanfics... Like one young master #draco was not enough they want to make them rain...

Novelenthusisat:😅 sry about that.. .i will change it when I get some good idea for the synopsis. I didn't want to give away the plot of the story that's why I wrote the synopsis this way.
BigReader500
BigReader500Lv3

As the children we were when harry Potter was all popular mosy liked and nearly worshipped Hermione but most book readers started hating her and as people grew up they also hated Hermione. So nowadays most people want Hermione bashing novels tbh with you. Also since Grindelwald was introduced I found many likeminded people that he was very logical in his beliefs and muggles were and will remain an enemy of wizards if not stopped despite his radical methods to achieve his goal. So people don't like equality muggle rights, wizards are dumber fanfics anymore that say 5 years ago.

Novelenthusisat:😅 sry about that.. .i will change it when I get some good idea for the synopsis. I didn't want to give away the plot of the story that's why I wrote the synopsis this way.
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