Review Detail of Arathes in Abhorrence
Review detail
Hi author here, hoping to shed some light for any lurkers who are thinking about giving this fiction a shot. I will start off with a warning, this fiction contains mature content, profanity, gore, sexual content and traumatising content, and thus should not be viewed if any of this triggers you or by immature audiences. Now a little about this fiction, it is set in a dystopian modern day world currently in the midst of heavy strife and civil unrest. The start of this fiction marks the beginning of a wave of violent demonstrations against governments around the world by the populace who have had enough of their misconduct and mistreatment. The main character, Callum, is an orphan boy with no immediate knowledge of who he is, and wence he came from, he lived in an orphanage until boyhood when he met Bryan and eventually Arielle and they are currently living together as a trio of sibling like friends in ward 108, which could in one word be described as a 'slum'. Following his awakening, he gains newfound strength that he initially believes he can use to better the situation and living conditions of he and his friends. Much of the details of his awakening and what it entails are still unknown, no spoilers but everything will make sense by the end, if you still don't understand by then, let me know and I will personally explain it to you (no cap lol). There is a lot of depth to this story, especially the complex world that it is set in, and as an amateur writer, it will take me some time to flesh it out, heck you would not even be able to guess what this story is actually about until at least chapter 15 so please bare with me and give it the time I believe it deserves, because I'm making sure to take my time to write it to the best of my ability. One last thing, read in between the lines.
Abhorrence
Arathes
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Actually, I have already planned out and developed mc's powers, and I think it is super unique and cool, not anything that has been used anywhere else. And sure, I am aware that people can be sensitive to religion. The world it is set in will be expanded on hugely as the story develops.
Muhammad_Usama1:I have a request bro. In new abhorrence, can you expand the scale of the universe with the passage of time, giving the mc some unique power like cloning himself with clones having the same power as him but if they all train together when they merge, the mc will benefit. and as mc strengthens, the more clones he can make. reference novel is "infinite clone system". this kind of cool power. and can you please not involve religions or "gods" in it. I shall be thankful.
MrIIIo:Synopsis says u dont own it and i asumed u didn’t know where it was from so i just said it
currently reading this and i must say, this has to be the best writing I've seen in a long while and has motivated me to step up on my pen game, being a beginner writer myself. sadly, i use third person omniscient so there's a limit to what i could learn from your novel but please keep in mind that you're not just producing an amazing story but also inspiring others while at it. idk if you have experience on my kind of genres but I'd really love to have your opinion and guidance as regards to my work going forward since I kind of still don't know how things work on here
brizzy_lxxvii:currently reading this and i must say, this has to be the best writing I've seen in a long while and has motivated me to step up on my pen game, being a beginner writer myself. sadly, i use third person omniscient so there's a limit to what i could learn from your novel but please keep in mind that you're not just producing an amazing story but also inspiring others while at it. idk if you have experience on my kind of genres but I'd really love to have your opinion and guidance as regards to my work going forward since I kind of still don't know how things work on here
yeah, I created one a few days ago. @brizzy_lxxvii username is Kise with the tag #8798 (forgive the unnecessary details as idk which is required to search for other users)
Arathes:Do you have discord?
brizzy_lxxvii:yeah, I created one a few days ago. @brizzy_lxxvii username is Kise with the tag #8798 (forgive the unnecessary details as idk which is required to search for other users)
I realised that what I was writing was boring trash. I've been rewriting the story and planning and writing my newest story. You can expect for me to release the new Abhorrence in like a week or two.
Muhammad_Usama1:where are you bro? why did you stop ?
I have a request bro. In new abhorrence, can you expand the scale of the universe with the passage of time, giving the mc some unique power like cloning himself with clones having the same power as him but if they all train together when they merge, the mc will benefit. and as mc strengthens, the more clones he can make. reference novel is "infinite clone system". this kind of cool power. and can you please not involve religions or "gods" in it. I shall be thankful.
Arathes:I realised that what I was writing was boring trash. I've been rewriting the story and planning and writing my newest story. You can expect for me to release the new Abhorrence in like a week or two.