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brizzy_lxxvii

brizzy_lxxvii

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dark arts practitioner.

2021-11-17 JoinedGlobal
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  • brizzy_lxxvii
    brizzy_lxxvii5mth
    Posted

    i haven't caught up yet but i enjoy how this book focuses intently on building character dynamics. the narrative is well written and each of the important characters thus far have a unique feel to them. some dialogue transitions could be smoother, and the world background could use a little more depth but overall, i envy your ability to let the plot unfold by itself, without the narrator revealing too much details.

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  • brizzy_lxxvii
    brizzy_lxxvii5mth
    Replied to Raphis

    definitely

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    Red Lotus: The Tale of an Outsider
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  • brizzy_lxxvii
    brizzy_lxxvii2yr
    Posted

    amazing story and writing style. keep up the good work.......................................................................................

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  • brizzy_lxxvii
    brizzy_lxxvii2yr
    Posted

    PS: I tweaked a few original works to arrive at this current cover and have no idea if it's legal or not but let's just make do with this for now.

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    Read 'Red Lotus: The Tale of an Outsider'
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  • brizzy_lxxvii
    brizzy_lxxvii2yr
    Commented

    congratulations on the contract 👏 well deserved

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  • brizzy_lxxvii
    brizzy_lxxvii2yr
    Replied to Arathes

    yeah, I created one a few days ago. @brizzy_lxxvii username is Kise with the tag #8798 (forgive the unnecessary details as idk which is required to search for other users)

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  • brizzy_lxxvii
    brizzy_lxxvii2yr
    Replied to Arathes

    currently reading this and i must say, this has to be the best writing I've seen in a long while and has motivated me to step up on my pen game, being a beginner writer myself. sadly, i use third person omniscient so there's a limit to what i could learn from your novel but please keep in mind that you're not just producing an amazing story but also inspiring others while at it. idk if you have experience on my kind of genres but I'd really love to have your opinion and guidance as regards to my work going forward since I kind of still don't know how things work on here

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