Review Detail of nickstar777wow in ◇Dark Souls◇

Item: ◇Dark Souls◇
Rating: 3.8

Review detail

nickstar777wowLv12yrnickstar777wow

I like the concept and where the author is going with this, but the only slight issue I have with it is grammar. Not that it's too bad but some things aren't quite worded right and some punctuations are misplaced. Other than that, 👍

◇Dark Souls◇

Rya_kishou

Liked it!

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Rya_kishouAuthorRya_kishou

I still need to let my Editor overwork the first chapters but starting the 4th it's all spell /grammar checked already. But I'm glad you like the concept of the story though! 🥺👉👈 And again sorry for the miscommunication before 😔

2yr