Well, what can I say.
Negative:
1) There is no plot development, after reading nineteen chapters, the plot repeats exactly the same as in manga / anime, except for the first chapters and some sentences (2-4). The story itself is empty, there is no zest in it.
2) Character development: The main character is just empty, does not intrigue, does not develop in any way, there are no interactions with other characters in this story (which is already visible as soon as GG calls his commanders people 1, 2, 3), the environment is also not blurred, there are no interactions with the squad (commanders), there are no reflections from the prativnik and others.
3) Filling the world: it's just static. We are not told what, for example, is happening in the village, in the capital, in the world.
Positive:
1) Choosing the world to write a story and that's it, since there are only three anime/manga Kingdom stories that are being written on this site. But only this one is being steadily updated.
Conclusion: The story began with a good turn, with an interesting choice of character style, but it is empty, just empty, like a composition based on a story. And this story wins over the other three only in terms of update stability.
