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LoyalCultivatorLv41yr
2023-02-18 23:05

I quite enjoy this book i definitely recommend that is your reading this review that you give this book a try but sadly I’m stuck at chapter 64 the now as the plot makes no sense as the author is updating the chapter the now

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Aurora_RyanAuthor

I'm making some changes and it is at the chapter.. I'll add sort this out for you

Aurora_RyanAuthor

Yes updating

Ongawd_ReaderLv1

wdym author are u going to change the novel? pls dont mind me rambling.. i wud like it if you focus more on the people instead of trying to increase his power like crazy..cough* introduce his daughter to a husband and daughter doesnt like him and finds a better one..*cough Anyway maybe in your next book u should focus more in the romance part i pretty much loved the date they had where they went killing the bandits its kinda new in most of the xianxia they focus more bout cultivating to an op degree and become immortals but then you find in the end they didnt accomplish anything like "record of a journey to immortality"the romance is vague and mostly focus on fights which are quite boring and theres no suspense cause u know the mc will win so they just drag the chapters i need drama in these xianxia and comedy and romance the best one i read was "A will eternal" Mc is op mostly in a shameless way.But its harem i want a couple that sticks together like this one also theres no xianxia that raises a kid together mostly mc just leaves the kid and just goes to increase his strength family drama is non existant wud love to see a family where mc helps his kids or kid raise him to be op

Aurora_Ryan:I'm making some changes and it is at the chapter.. I'll add sort this out for you
Aurora_RyanAuthor

Let do that in the next volume

Ongawd_Reader:wdym author are u going to change the novel? pls dont mind me rambling.. i wud like it if you focus more on the people instead of trying to increase his power like crazy..cough* introduce his daughter to a husband and daughter doesnt like him and finds a better one..*cough Anyway maybe in your next book u should focus more in the romance part i pretty much loved the date they had where they went killing the bandits its kinda new in most of the xianxia they focus more bout cultivating to an op degree and become immortals but then you find in the end they didnt accomplish anything like "record of a journey to immortality"the romance is vague and mostly focus on fights which are quite boring and theres no suspense cause u know the mc will win so they just drag the chapters i need drama in these xianxia and comedy and romance the best one i read was "A will eternal" Mc is op mostly in a shameless way.But its harem i want a couple that sticks together like this one also theres no xianxia that raises a kid together mostly mc just leaves the kid and just goes to increase his strength family drama is non existant wud love to see a family where mc helps his kids or kid raise him to be op
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