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Aurora_RyanAuthor2yr
2022-09-03 01:33

Hello readers, being my first book, the beginning chapters might have many issues including grammar errors.. Under development... I'll try to make the story interesting to mske up for this issue... Please bear with it

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Manhua_RealmLv3

hi, harem?

Lord_HasturLv4

harem???

ImmortalGhostLv13

I hopes there’s no harem

Yuki_55Lv14

is this harem? pls answer this time…

Aurora_RyanAuthor

Not really

Yuki_55:is this harem? pls answer this time…
Yuki_55Lv14

what do you mean?

Aurora_Ryan:Not really
Aurora_RyanAuthor

There isn't

Yuki_55:what do you mean?
Aurora_RyanAuthor

No

Manhua_Realm:hi, harem?
Aurora_RyanAuthor

No

Manhua_Realm:hi, harem?
Aurora_RyanAuthor

No

Manhua_Realm:hi, harem?
Aurora_RyanAuthor

There isn't

ImmortalGhost:I hopes there’s no harem
Aurora_RyanAuthor

How far have you gotten with it

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Aurora_RyanAuthor

I'm working on that the novel is long

Aurora_Ryan:How far have you gotten with it
Ashborn1609Lv4

I'm planning on reading this book in 8 days when I'm freed from exams cuz I wouldn't want to get addicted again while I have to study 😅

Aurora_Ryan:How far have you gotten with it
Ashborn1609Lv4

you still haven't replied to my question single female lead or more than one? more than one is harem

Aurora_Ryan:How far have you gotten with it
Aurora_RyanAuthor

Yeah. Thought you were asking about harem sorry

Ashborn1609:you still haven't replied to my question single female lead or more than one? more than one is harem
Ashborn1609Lv4

sorry but I'm disgusted of harem so single fl or not

Aurora_Ryan:Yeah. Thought you were asking about harem sorry
Aurora_RyanAuthor

single fl

Ashborn1609:sorry but I'm disgusted of harem so single fl or not
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Aurora_RyanAuthor

female lead is one introduced in the 1st chapter

Ashborn1609:you still haven't replied to my question single female lead or more than one? more than one is harem
Veasna_TDMLv11

The story is really confusing to me, not only because of the grammar, but also because the timeline is unclear(a lot of time-skip without much context), and there is no build up of anticipation at all, everything just happen unexpectedly. Plus some event end without conclusion, and the story already move on to the next phase. It all add up to the confusion of the reader. The story has good plot, but the way to write it need a bit of change. Add more context.

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