Review Detail of SoulOfALostUndead in A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

I'm really liking this story so far although it could do without the harem. Definitely worth it to pick up. Let's just hope the author can keep the harem at bay and doesn't ruin the story with it, he's already got 5 women with a possible 6th. My suggestion to the author slow down on the amount of women and try to develop his relationship with them before adding anymore. I've seen to many good ff ruined by the harem aspect.