pelicans came and took over your comment section

just curious is the mc gonna get bloodborne related things or is the cover just because you thought it looked cool?

slight error (not a big deal) you kept referring to fish rolf and Hermione as the 3 boys when there's 2 boys and one girl .instead you could change it to the 3 kids. you don't need to change it if it's a hassle just thought I'd point it out :)

my advice don't follow the pull as it may lead to you losing motivation for the story. it's your story not the readers so do what you want most don't care for some small plot holes and as long as you still write what you want and it doesn't come out as gibberish people will still continue reading.

Harem ff suck not because the harem itself, its because when a ff has a harem its usually the authors sex fantasy putting themselves in the mc place and writing all there fantasies about the characters the want to f and the ways they want it to happen. So 90 percent of harem ff are just unappealing to read

So if I read right, something auto unlocks if he knows exactly how its made? Then can't he just use the internet and look up a ton of things searching how pretty much anything useful is made? Guns,food,explosives,bulletproof vest,fences,etc. Also if so since lightsaber is in the list can't he also look up how its made to?I'm pretty sure its explained somewhere on the internet. Along with tons of other useful fantasy or sci-fi weapons?

Lelouch not only because of code geass but, it mean the suspicious in French. You can make his adventurer name sus with that. (I think I'd be funny for people who know)

Plus the reality marble part doesn't have too look like emiyas so you can choose a design for his reality marble for ubw. Ps the ability belongs to another character named shirou (spelt different but still the same) so it fits

Maybe give him UBW from fate its a strong ability but only when it copies a lot a strong swords but the naruto world doesn't have that many strong swords except for the 7 swordsmen of the mist swords. So it won't be too strong but he will have infinite weapons for any fight provided he has the Chakra for it.

Is this dropped or are you just preoccupied with life ? No worry either way just want a heads up

What about the onion and his daughter you can't leave them behind

It just occurred to me are they gonna go get the gaping dragon too you kinda skipped right over it. Wanna see people freak out to all its teeth

Ya said the wrong name noticed to late, but my point stands. can't edit these things sadly

I mean it makes sense if you just notice that the mc is merlin from fate reincarnated you need no other explanation for his actions. If he was a reincarnate from earth or something similar then it would be a different story.

I'm really liking this story so far although it could do without the harem. Definitely worth it to pick up. Let's just hope the author can keep the harem at bay and doesn't ruin the story with it, he's already got 5 women with a possible 6th. My suggestion to the author slow down on the amount of women and try to develop his relationship with them before adding anymore. I've seen to many good ff ruined by the harem aspect.

inches* i misspelled that

Say you give him Edward elric, his clothes would mimic his his hair would turn blond his eyes gold his arm and leg metal and lastly he would get a couple inces shorter

Honestly I'm fine with the way it is but if you do change it don't just change the clothes. Hair, eye, and skin color should also change to match the charicter

Blood bending is my guess its skin is invincible but not its insides

I just said the first ones that popped in my head cus of the characters abilities. Escanor uses sunlight for his ability demon slayer use sunlight to kill demons / dian is big titans are big / ban well it was just the first anime/manga to pop in my head the world's I said aren't a solid thing they were just the first ones I thought of and I didn't give much thought to it.