Review Detail of AnotherAtlas in RWBY: RYZE

Item: RWBY: RYZE
Rating: 3.6

Review detail

AnotherAtlasLv22yrAnotherAtlas

3,5. Could be better. The words are sort of vomited out at times. Story isn't original. Why does the spider woman go to a cave? Is she god damn honeless?

RWBY: RYZE

Slothful

Liked it!

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SlothfulAuthorSlothful

Not enough love for the red panda.

AnotherAtlas:Good choice on red panda at least.

2yr

AnotherAtlasLv2AnotherAtlas

Good choice on red panda at least.

2yr

SlothfulAuthorSlothful

1.Word vomit is fair. 2. not original its a fanfic so I guess, if you meant this in another way do tell. 3.story plots I was planning to explore said plots later. Apart from me nitpicking thanks for reading, hope you stick around!

2yr

AnotherAtlasLv2AnotherAtlas

I didn't mean original as a completely new story, I meant the way your fanfic starts and especially goes forward in the story. At least from what I remember.

Slothful:1.Word vomit is fair. 2. not original its a fanfic so I guess, if you meant this in another way do tell. 3.story plots I was planning to explore said plots later. Apart from me nitpicking thanks for reading, hope you stick around!

2yr

AnotherAtlasLv2AnotherAtlas

Also i meant to say homeless, not honeless.

Slothful:1.Word vomit is fair. 2. not original its a fanfic so I guess, if you meant this in another way do tell. 3.story plots I was planning to explore said plots later. Apart from me nitpicking thanks for reading, hope you stick around!

2yr