Review Detail of AnotherAtlas in RWBY: RYZE

Item: RWBY: RYZE
Rating: 3.6

Review detail

AnotherAtlasLv22yrAnotherAtlas

3,5. Could be better. The words are sort of vomited out at times. Story isn't original. Why does the spider woman go to a cave? Is she god damn honeless?

RWBY: RYZE

Slothful

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SlothfulAuthorSlothful

1.Word vomit is fair. 2. not original its a fanfic so I guess, if you meant this in another way do tell. 3.story plots I was planning to explore said plots later. Apart from me nitpicking thanks for reading, hope you stick around!

2yr

AnotherAtlasLv2AnotherAtlas

Good choice on red panda at least.

2yr

SlothfulAuthorSlothful

Not enough love for the red panda.

AnotherAtlas:Good choice on red panda at least.

2yr

AnotherAtlasLv2AnotherAtlas

I didn't mean original as a completely new story, I meant the way your fanfic starts and especially goes forward in the story. At least from what I remember.

Slothful:1.Word vomit is fair. 2. not original its a fanfic so I guess, if you meant this in another way do tell. 3.story plots I was planning to explore said plots later. Apart from me nitpicking thanks for reading, hope you stick around!

2yr

AnotherAtlasLv2AnotherAtlas

Also i meant to say homeless, not honeless.

Slothful:1.Word vomit is fair. 2. not original its a fanfic so I guess, if you meant this in another way do tell. 3.story plots I was planning to explore said plots later. Apart from me nitpicking thanks for reading, hope you stick around!

2yr