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2021-11-03 13:40

A good story but not very fanfic-ish. It is one of those fix-it stories where the MC transmigrates/reincarnates into the OGMC’s body and fix everything the OG MC didn’t do. Too bland. The writing is just meh but the MC who is an asexual buddhist detached from the world is extremely boring. I think the author was trying to pull a no-nonsense emotionless character that strives to achieve his goals but it ended up as a dull character getting everything OG MC got. 4 - Stars for writing Quality Bland just like the mc but no superfluous bs other authors does to get more word count 5 - Updating Stability The author is consistent, like his MC 2 - Story Development Nothing much, no twist and no other elements from the OG novel. Just a robot speed running the entire thing 1 - Character Design I don’t think it could be called a ‘Character’ because the MC feels like an AI programmed to finish the story as fast as possible. 5 - World Backgrounders Its ATG. Wuxia universes for the win! Overall I think the author should work on his MC to make it more interesting. Make the character interact more because it was very boring for me. Since the MC set the story’s pace, I ended up speed running the entitre thing thus wasting my time. My final judgment is that your story is very bland and boring. Make it more interesting for future readers.

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