concept is good, mc is also nice (easygoing personality) update speed is also okay but writing quality and story execution sucks too much..... first thing first I can't understand how trade works .... the store evaluate the customer for everything he or she is worth in terms of spirit point which they use for trade now here's the question- the customer are not losing anything for the point they used for trade.... so where are the point coming from also different timeline are mixed when zuzuqing arrived she was 3-4yrs old , it was stated she's from different timeline but now they are in same(original).... next is gender are always mixed.....(one doesn't need to know grammar for getting gender correct)

This novel has two big problems I can see atm. 1 The translation is often pretty bad. It's understandable, but still bad. 2 Even with apparently changed fates, the characters act pretty much the same. Originally Tang San built up his love for Xiao Wu from an early age i'm pretty sure. Here, he just falls in love at first sight + Xiao Wu is acting the exact same way she would with Xin as she would have with Tang. Experiences make a part of a person. It's extremely unrealistic seeing some of these characters acting the same way they did in the og.

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The writing is clunky and doesn't flow well at all. The system is straight up garbage that made the MC into a slave with severe penalties and forced quests. Don't bother with it.

harem trash and even worse its ntr. even though the author hasn't tagged it as harem. he constantly introduces more thots and some of those thots already have destined partners so yeah ntr. such a shame was interesting but I cant and also the system abuses him as well

great story only one issue and that is the grammar not to say mine is any better but still I will never write a book so you can't criticise me. hahaha

Interesting concept unfortunately the MC is a total slave of the system ................................................................................

it's interesting... but what's the point in the shop, it's more like he's giving free itens, the first customer used almost all of her sp, and after using the itens she purchased , she got 7k sp, so what's the point in this? there's a part where is said that the customer can use life force, fate, money, etc. to purchase, but I didn't see the mention of this when he sold the itens...

I'm going to be honest, I wish I could love this fanfiction but the translation is horrific, there are often many times when you have to invent what you think is being said as what they said makes absolutely no sense. in general it could be good, but it suffers majorly due to a horrible translation that is not showing ANY signs of improvement.