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95_novel_maniac_95Lv53yr
2021-11-17 16:50

concept is good, mc is also nice (easygoing personality) update speed is also okay but writing quality and story execution sucks too much..... first thing first I can't understand how trade works .... the store evaluate the customer for everything he or she is worth in terms of spirit point which they use for trade now here's the question- the customer are not losing anything for the point they used for trade.... so where are the point coming from also different timeline are mixed when zuzuqing arrived she was 3-4yrs old , it was stated she's from different timeline but now they are in same(original).... next is gender are always mixed.....(one doesn't need to know grammar for getting gender correct)

All Heaven and Worlds Store

LittleApple
4.3
250 Chs

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Ranandh
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costumer losing their "Spirit Point", and trade some overpowered things with their destiny/fate in future, in the end there is some stated in this problem

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Ranandh
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(Spirit Point) , maybe this thing can be growing up when you get stronger enough, or have huge impact for world itself.

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