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2021-11-11 04:52

(very long rating) it's not a good dxd ff but not a bad one either it's just a "normal" dxd ff nothing special as this ff is like any other dxd ff out there sigh I dont know why authors waste the potential of the dxd world it has so much to offer, its always starts with the mc being reborn trains then time skip then the mc goes to kouh town like cant you make it more interesting the dxd world has so much stuff in it and still there all the same for example the mc goes on an adventure to get stronger go to the Norse meet the Norse God learn some stuff like runes help Odin with his wife(bull some bs)and get rossweisse as waifu or the mc can go to the Greek gods fight them(some are arrogant)lose(still weak) go to the underworld where he will meet hades, hades trains him come back and kick Zeus asś get his acknowledgement and also can get hestia as a waifu is so easy and I have another problem the mc isn't insta op but there is no difference we only know he trains and all of a sudden he can beat satan level it's the same as SAO Krito is op and we know he works for it but we didn't see so it makes no difference it's the same here if the author had more imagination and let the mc go on a adventure meet different gods, characters,mystical beings,monsters that never appear we will seeing the mc get strong not only will it be entertaining but we feel as the mc strength is well deserved as we follow him in his journey but sadly only a small amount of dxd ff do this not only dxd alot of fanfics as well and most of you may say "oh so why don't you make your own fanfic" thing is I want to so badly I have so many ideas but I'm always busy and I think its unfair to start a ff and just drop it well 3 stars from me not bad just ordinary

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Ototsu_Yume
Ototsu_YumeLv10

tbf authors tend to do that because it's easy so the majority of the novel ends up a copy paste of original for more views; it's the same reason a lot of games and movies end up being remakes sadly.

DaoistnMkJQ8
DaoistnMkJQ8Lv3

MC should form an organisation like hero camp. find some powerful people or with high potentials members and author should let the MC have the ambition to rule the world . rather than wasting his time in school.

Froschmann
FroschmannLv3

Try the godly crafter in dxd. It'S an outlier of what I found so far and more of what you want I guess. Good luck!

Abyssalidiot_
Abyssalidiot_Lv4

try it's the best DxD ff i found in this site Highschool DxD: A New Satan

onlycares
onlycaresLv13

Try Unique by Imbalance, It's super good and he trains for a a good while. There is a small timeskip in the start, but it doesn't amount to much.

viloh
vilohLv6

bruh, you're just describing the percy jackson fanfic made by cornbringer at this point if this is a coicidence and you haven't read it then you might as well try it out, it's pretty good it's called "percy jackson: the god of magic"

Ima_Bot
Ima_BotLv14

I know you left this review a while ago, but if you do end up looking at my comment with a still standing interest in the exploration of the world of Draconic Deus, then i think i might have something in mind. its a fanfic that isnt on Webnovel and its called “The Change of a Dragon.” It genuinely breaks off of Kouh as a whole after the first couple of chapters and explores different mythologies. Unfortunately, it was discontinued, but even reading whats there might be cool since this is something you described in pretty great detail.

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