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MichicotanLv153yr
2021-12-26 21:17

Overall, story isn't bad. Plot seems believable, but some parts are kind of rushed. Please get a good editor and fix all those grammar mistakes - don't just use google translate or thesaurus. Also, don't drag out and mansplain too much.

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TiphhunLv4

I agree with getting an editor. I dropped this book because it was too many sentences I couldn't understand etc. It's hard getting into the story when grammar is bad.

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