the story has an interesting premise however as you read on the story line gets jumbled and things get mentioned out of no where and then never again. It feels like a story the author has lost interest in and forgetting past progression. the writing is still better than an mtl
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I won't lie, I did lose interest in this one. (vampire Lord's Demonic Wives) has better flow and pace compared to this book. Please check out that one. Also, a few mtl are better written I grammatical aspects. Thank you for the honest remarks. Appreciate it~
It's great to see when authors can take criticism well and constructively. We all know that not everything works out the first time or the second time, but when you keep on trying you will certainly accomplish your goal. it might not be this novel but when you finally write the one you are truelly proud of, the path traveled will have all been worth it. keep it up. I'll definitely look into the one you mentioned.
Indeed. I always appreciate and listen calmly to criticism if it's valid. And I know I've messed up real hard in this book. LOL. Although the main theme was strong (as per other authors) but things slipped outta hands sooner than they should've gotten bumpy. So, yep! Focusing on not to repeat blunders in other book. 🤧🤣
