this novel is a hidden gem. Firstly, I feel the sense of character and personality of the Mc and Even side characters are well throughout, and each behave and converse in the way one would expect them to considering their circumstances and status. And for the Second point, Although there weren't many chapter so far, the pacing and content is done very well and does leave you expecting more withought giving the sense of boredom. The novel does not feel rushed and the story moves forward in a steady but enjoyable pace. the writing quality is top-notch, with no grammar errors. love reading this novel so far.

😢Why is there no NTR? This makes no sense. As an incubus does not look for other people's wives..............................................

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The worst thing I've read in my life 00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000

so I am deleting my past review, this doesn't deserve a 5 star review but it's a pretty interesting read, the author just has to work a bit more on the character design and story development it feels all over the place.

It's only the first chapter and the character development is solid. We get background on Kayden as the MC, reasons to root for him, and of course the mystery. Well, there are parts that feel a bit long-winded in explaining something, but that doesn't detract from my enjoyment of reading this novel.

the story has an interesting premise however as you read on the story line gets jumbled and things get mentioned out of no where and then never again. It feels like a story the author has lost interest in and forgetting past progression. the writing is still better than an mtl

Cover: 5/5, The cover edits is really amazing. One glance and I can already tell how much effort went into. Synopsis: 4/5. Although there are some info dumping in the synopsis, I was able to tell what's going on and what the story would be about. Grammar: 4/5 Grammar wise, this novel is so much better than 90% of the novels in here. There aren't any sentences in this novel that would suddenly changed it tenses midway so I'm happy about this. Writing: 4.8/5. Story wise and the writing structure is mesmerizing. I have been thoroughly impressed by author's unique way of storytelling and I can't wait to read more. Overall: 4.8/5. Would I recommend this novel to you? The answer would be yes and you should read it to prove my review right. Sincerely, The one and only Doraemon~