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2021-12-17 22:01

so I am deleting my past review, this doesn't deserve a 5 star review but it's a pretty interesting read, the author just has to work a bit more on the character design and story development it feels all over the place.

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Um, elaborate a bit more please. What exactly do you mean by 'all over the place?' However I understand the character design still lacks emotional emphasis. But I'm willing to listen to the perceptions and suggestions.

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Nah, lol they get auto deleted by WN for cus-sing in reviews. Try that yourself to testify xD

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