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Whitestair_Ivory
Whitestair_IvoryLv53yr
2022-03-10 03:21

A real disappointment, MC is sent years before canon and all he ever did in those years is nothing. The only change he made is Ram has horn and Rem is not suicidal, the rest is generic Re:Zero ff template. MC as a person is a bland, boring and somewhat lacking both personality and the brain department. His powers are on paper really fùckin good but the author can't write for shît to show it, just a statement that he's powerful. His interactions between characters are what you would get from a socially deprived neet who only knows about conversations from novels and think it's the norm, a cringe fest. Worst of all, the author might be new in even reading novels because he likes to make the mc make illogical decisions and being a master of inaction just so whatever small plot he has going can go in his way, a forced plot so to say, a thing everyone hates.

Re: zero True oni

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Kevin_Pollard
Kevin_PollardLv4

he was a kid, you do realize that, L review

3yr
mow
mowLv4

He was reincarnated you moron.

Kevin_Pollard:he was a kid, you do realize that, L review
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Lord_KitiKat
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This is the best ff on Re: Zero so far, just please, please don't give it up. I mean it seriously, he is really the best just without words the most important thing is do not give it up here really hold on with your last strength The plot is good, the English is also excellent, as is the grammar, the character is also not bad Deserved 5 stars would be more I would put

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antonio_montenegro
antonio_montenegroLv3

Reveal spoiler

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UndeadProgenitor
UndeadProgenitorLv14

The character and the author have been a disappointment to me. Tha MC literally using a sword and work out at 1. That was tolerable as the reason was to protect the village from the impending doom (cult attack). When the time came not only did he not try to protect the village (by convincing the adults, setting traps, or fight the cultists). He chose to go hang out with the kids when he knew it was risky. The cultists attacked that day and he froze up wasting over 7 years of training and “preparation”. Just like that the author lacked originality and forced a plot.

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Ozonelayer
OzonelayerLv14

I am so proud to be apart of this great big family, nothings going to take this away from me, I'm part of the Delirious army Delirious army. I am so proud to be apart of this great big family, nothings going to take this away from me, I'm part of the Delirious army Delirious army. I am so proud to be apart of this great big family, nothings going to take this away from me, I'm part of the Delirious army Delirious army. I am so proud to be apart of this great big family, nothings going to take this away from me, I'm part of the Delirious army Delirious army.

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Divine_Onahole
Divine_OnaholeLv3

should aded tragedy tag on this fanfic ..some people reading fanfic for wishfullfilment not watching tragedy..

3yr
DaoisteHo6ya
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ZM374
ZM374Lv5

One of the best novel i have read. The Author of this novel clearly understood what's the reader want. I like the idea of this novel, a really really good novel.

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_Anix
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good fanfic. dont drop dont drop dont drop dont drop dont drop dont drop dont drop dont drop dont drop dont drop

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Man_of_culture
Man_of_cultureLv11

Even the author is mixing up names. Grammar and spelling could be better with Grammarly or a other kind of correction app. There are just some needles spelling mistakes that could be easily avoided, other than that a quite enjoyable story.

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Kaniion
KaniionLv2

A very different story in Re:zero, with the protagonist starting in the Oni village. From what I've read it's very good and I hope you don't drop it before it's over.

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