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UndeadProgenitor
UndeadProgenitorLv143yr
2022-02-08 16:48

The character and the author have been a disappointment to me. Tha MC literally using a sword and work out at 1. That was tolerable as the reason was to protect the village from the impending doom (cult attack). When the time came not only did he not try to protect the village (by convincing the adults, setting traps, or fight the cultists). He chose to go hang out with the kids when he knew it was risky. The cultists attacked that day and he froze up wasting over 7 years of training and “preparation”. Just like that the author lacked originality and forced a plot.

Re: zero True oni

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Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv14

what are u talking about he did everything u said , he tried convincing the adults but they didn't take it seriously bc of their pride , he made sure to set traps that woul dkill a lot of cultists and would alert the village to an attack , the MC literally didn't know when the cult was attacking so he made sure to always have his sword by his side while carrying out his daily activity and he didn't freeze up he stayed behind to protect rem and ram he needs to make sure none of them lose their horns or gets kille d, the only reason the mc failed is bc he understimated how many cultists would invade

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UndeadProgenitor
UndeadProgenitorLv14

I had to read this again because I had no idea what you’re talking about. Had you taken the time to properly read my review you’d see the things I pointed out are no longer there. One thing I do remember was the grammar and the main character being seven years old…that changed to nine years old. But yeah, thanks for taking your time to answer me though.

Daoist4MxvaV:what are u talking about he did everything u said , he tried convincing the adults but they didn't take it seriously bc of their pride , he made sure to set traps that woul dkill a lot of cultists and would alert the village to an attack , the MC literally didn't know when the cult was attacking so he made sure to always have his sword by his side while carrying out his daily activity and he didn't freeze up he stayed behind to protect rem and ram he needs to make sure none of them lose their horns or gets kille d, the only reason the mc failed is bc he understimated how many cultists would invade
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PixelPiranha
PixelPiranhaLv3

Did the author fix the issues you mentiomed?

UndeadProgenitor:I had to read this again because I had no idea what you’re talking about. Had you taken the time to properly read my review you’d see the things I pointed out are no longer there. One thing I do remember was the grammar and the main character being seven years old…that changed to nine years old. But yeah, thanks for taking your time to answer me though.
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This is the best ff on Re: Zero so far, just please, please don't give it up. I mean it seriously, he is really the best just without words the most important thing is do not give it up here really hold on with your last strength The plot is good, the English is also excellent, as is the grammar, the character is also not bad Deserved 5 stars would be more I would put

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should aded tragedy tag on this fanfic ..some people reading fanfic for wishfullfilment not watching tragedy..

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Even the author is mixing up names. Grammar and spelling could be better with Grammarly or a other kind of correction app. There are just some needles spelling mistakes that could be easily avoided, other than that a quite enjoyable story.

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