Review Detail of 50ShadesOfAss in Unbound Familiar
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Familar Zero. The anime that started my hate for “Beta”, lame and Garbage main characters Unfortunately it is no different here. Possibly worse because this is a fanfiction and you expect something different This mc is so fûcking lame it hurts. I dont like using the word Beta or simp anymore, but thats exactly what this mc is He becomes Louis familiar and just accepts becoming a slave. He pervs on girls then acts like a loser once he Gets caught Simps on Louis as she proceeds to beat him up, abuse him while calling him her personal dog. what happens after though? Like the loser he is, Mc just blushes cause shes naked and continues to get beat up Dont bother reading this trash
Unbound Familiar
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Ok so I wish I had read this before diving in myself because this mc goes on to make extremely bad choices repeatedly on abilities. His picks when he has literally teleportation and permanent invisibility as well as a really good aoe are instead a lame spellcaster so he can make like he's a noble(that idea lasts all of one chapter before he kills a young master in a duel and somehow instead of honoring the results of a duel as is customary he's thrown in jail in spite of demonstrating that he has noble status via magic)
And mind that the excuse used here is that "the mages probably have a way to detect him anyways" which doesn't hold water as the guy regularly sneaks past literally legendary mages on a regular basis in league.
America_Yea:Ok so I wish I had read this before diving in myself because this mc goes on to make extremely bad choices repeatedly on abilities. His picks when he has literally teleportation and permanent invisibility as well as a really good aoe are instead a lame spellcaster so he can make like he's a noble(that idea lasts all of one chapter before he kills a young master in a duel and somehow instead of honoring the results of a duel as is customary he's thrown in jail in spite of demonstrating that he has noble status via magic)
He's 'beta'? He's now of Destroying villages and Torturing all the people that tortured him. He has forgotten about Louise. Also did you ever even watch Familiar of Zero? Do you not know that there are runes that force the familiar to be subservient to the Master...and how does that judge this novel as a 1-star? I mean like how.
Shin_Senpai:He's 'beta'? He's now of Destroying villages and Torturing all the people that tortured him. He has forgotten about Louise. Also did you ever even watch Familiar of Zero? Do you not know that there are runes that force the familiar to be subservient to the Master...and how does that judge this novel as a 1-star? I mean like how.
Shin_Senpai:He's 'beta'? He's now of Destroying villages and Torturing all the people that tortured him. He has forgotten about Louise. Also did you ever even watch Familiar of Zero? Do you not know that there are runes that force the familiar to be subservient to the Master...and how does that judge this novel as a 1-star? I mean like how.
Oomph, sadly I like the necessary hormones and this amount of simping in real life is equal to bankruptcy and/or suicide
Shin_Senpai:Everyone is a simp whether you accept it or not.
I have to disagree, we have a anti-social gamer thrown into another world after being almost killed and confronted by a louise, a person with a VERY strong character with MAGIC. You cannot expect him to just stand up and confront her right? with her having magic to cause explosions that can kill him on a whim?. The mc has done what he can to survive after being hunted by basically everyone everywhere. Its just the first 20 or so chapters that are hard to read because the mc is weak and all. but its gets better... MC its not really that smart in taking decisions but he improves later on.
Psan:I have to disagree, we have a anti-social gamer thrown into another world after being almost killed and confronted by a louise, a person with a VERY strong character with MAGIC. You cannot expect him to just stand up and confront her right? with her having magic to cause explosions that can kill him on a whim?. The mc has done what he can to survive after being hunted by basically everyone everywhere. Its just the first 20 or so chapters that are hard to read because the mc is weak and all. but its gets better... MC its not really that smart in taking decisions but he improves later on.
Also if the runes make them subservient, then how does one explain his pervy behaviour? or his continuous doing of said perverted actions? also just because he is 'now' doesn't mean his past actions just stop existing after that, its still there.
Shin_Senpai:He's 'beta'? He's now of Destroying villages and Torturing all the people that tortured him. He has forgotten about Louise. Also did you ever even watch Familiar of Zero? Do you not know that there are runes that force the familiar to be subservient to the Master...and how does that judge this novel as a 1-star? I mean like how.
I don't know about the pervy behavior as it was sort of instantly stopped. Also, about the last part, his actions are still indeed there but his character has developed beyond that.
EpithetEnjoyer:Also if the runes make them subservient, then how does one explain his pervy behaviour? or his continuous doing of said perverted actions? also just because he is 'now' doesn't mean his past actions just stop existing after that, its still there.