Item: Marvel : Different Peter Parker
Rating: 1
Author: OrdealOfMc

OrdealOfMcLv53yr

2021-10-27 21:09

Why tha ghelm would you claim that youre fixing grammar in the story even though it still sucks. Not only youre stealing other people works to satisfy your ego as a "creator", you dont even put any effort into it.

Marvel : Different Peter Parker

INSANE_GAMER

3.6

48 Chs

Liked by 16 people

Replies3

INSANE_GAMERAuthor

Impressive observation bro. I don't know from where I copied anything in this novel and as for my Grammer I know it's not good and I am trying my best to improve it. but thanks for your review.😁

3yr

CountWatermelonTMLv4

If you edited your chapters with that level of grammar it would be about 100x better

INSANE_GAMER:Impressive observation bro. I don't know from where I copied anything in this novel and as for my Grammer I know it's not good and I am trying my best to improve it. but thanks for your review.😁

3yr

CyanideOverdoseLv6

True....

CountWatermelonTM:If you edited your chapters with that level of grammar it would be about 100x better

3yr

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Wish fulfillment stories are not usually a trope that is about good writing. Usually it's mostly about bringing forth a vision of the author's, and this author has chosen to unify a large selection of world's and alter a large selection of stories into one. Reincarnated as Peter Parker, use of Haki, powers from Bleach. Story feels very rushed as well, as events that could be slowed down are explained in passing as if it is not important. The grammar can be excused because english is not the author's first language. However the switch from first person to third person is quite jarring and occurs haphazardly.

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ReviewerAndyLv4

This may be the worst grammar, spelling, sentence structure and storytelling I have ever read. Wow. This may be a perfect example of telling and not showing.

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XxPedroxXLv4

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fsdf_adsfsdLv13

Interesting ideas but not much else. It's about Peter Parker but I'm not sure why. Disregard the quality of the writing or story, it feels like a basic Chinese web novel. Every character feels out of place in a Marvel story, or western story for that matter. Fine to read if you have time to kill I guess.

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XxPedroxXLv4

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Shujinko_JoseiLv12

What can I say other than be very disappointed. From chapters 1 - 3 I can already see bad starting golden finger and MC had no brains. From chapters 4 - 5 where I dropped because of boredom.

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ScottyTheDLv5

Atrocious grammar, I couldn't even make it through a single chapter. .......................................................................

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