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AEGIR123
AEGIR123Lv43yr
2021-10-16 00:47

more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem please.

Marvel : Different Peter Parker

INSANE_GAMER
3.6
48 Chs

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C0DA
C0DALv2

this is honestly sad

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iTride
iTrideLv6

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Slothiticus
SlothiticusLv14

this is one of the reasons this app is going down hill

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Solomolecule
SolomoleculeLv14

most of webnovel is just Chinese young master novels or harems

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Randomguy010
Randomguy010Lv3

By Saying A Harem Ruins The Story Means You Doubting The Authors Ability To Develop Relationships And Characters. A Harem Can Be Good If Its Not The Main Focus Of The Story But That Doesn't Mean It Should Be Something That Pops Up Rarely Nad Like I Said Earlier If The Characters Relationships Are Developed Well. You're Only Saying That Because You've Probably Read Badly Developed Harem Where They Fall For The Mc With No Developing.

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Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5

no , I have seen a lot of single pair or story without romance that are equally as bad as the one with it .....it all depends on authors skill story here are good and many not too good cause it's easy for almost anyone to post stories here other sites like Wattpad are even worse ... so don't talk and genralize of you don't know anything

Slothiticus:this is one of the reasons this app is going down hill
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Slothiticus
SlothiticusLv14

I agree to your point if harem is not the central focus of the story the story can still develop nicely but this is rarely if ever done and seems to become even worse on this app as time goes on. Your point kind of contradicts itself though as it proves that harem stories are bad writing as they are not capable of standing on their own without essentially being background noise of a good story one can write a story and develop characters without a harem which begs the question what does harem offer to the story to improve it and the answer is nothing harem is a plot devise that serves no purpose other than filler so why use it.

Randomguy010:By Saying A Harem Ruins The Story Means You Doubting The Authors Ability To Develop Relationships And Characters. A Harem Can Be Good If Its Not The Main Focus Of The Story But That Doesn't Mean It Should Be Something That Pops Up Rarely Nad Like I Said Earlier If The Characters Relationships Are Developed Well. You're Only Saying That Because You've Probably Read Badly Developed Harem Where They Fall For The Mc With No Developing.
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Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5

Also a story from Wãttpad "bloody luck" that's s very intresting take on supernatural where mc is very unique

Slothiticus:I agree to your point if harem is not the central focus of the story the story can still develop nicely but this is rarely if ever done and seems to become even worse on this app as time goes on. Your point kind of contradicts itself though as it proves that harem stories are bad writing as they are not capable of standing on their own without essentially being background noise of a good story one can write a story and develop characters without a harem which begs the question what does harem offer to the story to improve it and the answer is nothing harem is a plot devise that serves no purpose other than filler so why use it.
3yr
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Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5

Also don't use words like hãrem in webnovel comments, webnovel auto bans comments or people using word like hãrêm , têên ,ãdült , shït etc ....and many more 😂

Slothiticus:I agree to your point if harem is not the central focus of the story the story can still develop nicely but this is rarely if ever done and seems to become even worse on this app as time goes on. Your point kind of contradicts itself though as it proves that harem stories are bad writing as they are not capable of standing on their own without essentially being background noise of a good story one can write a story and develop characters without a harem which begs the question what does harem offer to the story to improve it and the answer is nothing harem is a plot devise that serves no purpose other than filler so why use it.
3yr
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Randomguy010
Randomguy010Lv3

I Have a question why do people read fanfiction like it was made by Shakespeare himself?

Slothiticus:I agree to your point if harem is not the central focus of the story the story can still develop nicely but this is rarely if ever done and seems to become even worse on this app as time goes on. Your point kind of contradicts itself though as it proves that harem stories are bad writing as they are not capable of standing on their own without essentially being background noise of a good story one can write a story and develop characters without a harem which begs the question what does harem offer to the story to improve it and the answer is nothing harem is a plot devise that serves no purpose other than filler so why use it.
3yr
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Randomguy010
Randomguy010Lv3

Why not use it either if it's in the Background

Slothiticus:I agree to your point if harem is not the central focus of the story the story can still develop nicely but this is rarely if ever done and seems to become even worse on this app as time goes on. Your point kind of contradicts itself though as it proves that harem stories are bad writing as they are not capable of standing on their own without essentially being background noise of a good story one can write a story and develop characters without a harem which begs the question what does harem offer to the story to improve it and the answer is nothing harem is a plot devise that serves no purpose other than filler so why use it.
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Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5

yes that's what I was thinking as well, fanfics are supposed to be read for fun and guilty pleasure not a literary masterpiece

Randomguy010:I Have a question why do people read fanfiction like it was made by Shakespeare himself?
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welcome_7920a
welcome_7920aLv5

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atomjack111
atomjack111Lv5

Reveal spoiler

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Acheronta
AcherontaLv4

Wish fulfillment stories are not usually a trope that is about good writing. Usually it's mostly about bringing forth a vision of the author's, and this author has chosen to unify a large selection of world's and alter a large selection of stories into one. Reincarnated as Peter Parker, use of Haki, powers from Bleach. Story feels very rushed as well, as events that could be slowed down are explained in passing as if it is not important. The grammar can be excused because english is not the author's first language. However the switch from first person to third person is quite jarring and occurs haphazardly.

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OrdealOfMc
OrdealOfMcLv5

Why tha ghelm would you claim that youre fixing grammar in the story even though it still sucks. Not only youre stealing other people works to satisfy your ego as a "creator", you dont even put any effort into it.

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ReviewerAndy
ReviewerAndyLv4

This may be the worst grammar, spelling, sentence structure and storytelling I have ever read. Wow. This may be a perfect example of telling and not showing.

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fsdf_adsfsd
fsdf_adsfsdLv13

Interesting ideas but not much else. It's about Peter Parker but I'm not sure why. Disregard the quality of the writing or story, it feels like a basic Chinese web novel. Every character feels out of place in a Marvel story, or western story for that matter. Fine to read if you have time to kill I guess.

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XxPedroxXLv4

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Shujinko_Josei
Shujinko_JoseiLv12

What can I say other than be very disappointed. From chapters 1 - 3 I can already see bad starting golden finger and MC had no brains. From chapters 4 - 5 where I dropped because of boredom.

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ScottyTheD
ScottyTheDLv5

Atrocious grammar, I couldn't even make it through a single chapter. .......................................................................

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