I like the characters, the gurl is innocent and don't know much of the world, the wolf is very naughty, not sure if he is good or evil yet, but he seems to be a good men. The grandma is heartfull and the witch is a good witch I guess. I would like if you could describe the world where they are in. And don't let them be in the cave for too long. Also you could make the chapters a little bit longer. But prinzipiell is the story good, continue writing :)
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