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Greay11mthReplied to B_McmasterCh 15 Chapter 15 The Plan And The Deal- Greay11mthPosted
The book is well written with no grammar errors which is great, the actually story is also very interesting to read, and the synopsis gives the reader a good first view of the story Cons are thought, the story progress way too fast at the beginning, I would understand it if it's the prologue thought, But in the end I still like the idea of the story and hope the author continues
- Greay11mthCommentedCh 6 6: A Promise to Return (1)
- Greay11mthCommentedCh 5 5: The End of Training
- Greay11mthCommentedCh 4 4: Becoming Stronger
- Greay11mthCommentedCh 3 3: A New Beginning
- Greay11mthCommentedCh 2 2: Resurrected
- Greay11mthCommentedCh 1 1: The Abyss of Tormented Souls
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I started reading the book with not very much expection since it's the first book of the other, but I can't describe how wrong I was! The chapters have a nice flow, have comedy, are exciting and a plot which well blown my mind for a second since I didn't expected it all In short, I cannot recommend Bibliomancer highly enough. This is a truly remarkable work of literature, and I believe that anyone who appreciates a good book will find themselves completely engrossed in its pages. If you're looking for a thought-provoking and beautifully written story that will stay with you long after you've finished reading, then this is the book for you. This review are based on the first 14 chapters, I will rewrite this review probably in the future, but as for now, keep it up author really nice work!
- Greay11mthCommentedCh 14 Chapter X: The Truth About this Story – The Ice Coffin Who Bring Forth a New Story – Part I
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Wow
"As I said, she has been manipulating you ever since you met her. No, even before maybe. When she realized you were the main character, she thought she had to take measures against you. She modified your brain so that you would be in admiration with her whatever she does. Additionally, she made you emotionally dependent on her house, which is why you can't even think about leaving it. Even that crest was done at that moment. When you woke up, I tried to make you afraid thinking that the stress would make you run away, but it didn't work. Later, she modified my brain too so that I can't—" - Greay11mthCommentedCh 13 Chapitre IX: Errands in the Industrial District – A Doll's Laugh
- Greay11mthCommentedCh 12 Chapter VIII: A Second Showdown – Didn't You Forget About the Explanations?
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LOL
"Umm, wait," she said, confused, "so you are saying that for 'SOME REASON' I will randomly get mad from horniness starting today?" - Greay11mthCommentedCh 11 Chapter VII: A Strange Cold – Shogo Lose to Alexandra (?)
- Greay11mthCommentedBefore she could continue, Shogo pressed her lips against Alexandra's, kissing her deeply and passionately. For a few moments, Alexandra didn't quite understand what was going on – the strand on her head took a question mark form as she tried to figure out, no, to deny somehow what was happening to her.
- Greay11mthCommentedCh 10 Interlude: So… Where do I Sleep? – Let's Take the Fourth Option, Okay?
- Greay11mthCommentedShogo's eye widened as took a few steps back. "What… What do you mean by that, marshmallow girl? Is that sexual harassment? Are you sexually harassing me? I will let you know I don't plan to lose my virginity to someone like you. I totally refuse. You can sleep on the ground then, peeping tom."
- Greay11mthCommentedCh 9 Chapter VI: The 100 Angels' Slaying Assignment – You Shall Become my Student and Slave – Part II
- Greay11mthCommented"Ah! I knew it! So, what rank is your true target? It must at least be a rank 7, right? Is it necessary to use death's codes on it? Is it affected? Do you use something else? I heard that starting at rank 7, angels become ridiculous monsters akin to gods, is that true?"