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2024-06-14 20:47

i tried for the second time to read it, as it was in free access, and I just can't. The level of naivety and stupidity shown by the MC is astounding. Additionally, I suppose that the language level should improve with the amount of text uploaded, but it did not. There are plenty of mistakes & inconsistencies that make it somewhat difficult and annoying to read. I do not know why is this book so often given in free access :/

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