Wiktoria_Karolak

i tried for the second time to read it, as it was in free access, and I just can't. The level of naivety and stupidity shown by the MC is astounding. Additionally, I suppose that the language level should improve with the amount of text uploaded, but it did not. There are plenty of mistakes & inconsistencies that make it somewhat difficult and annoying to read. I do not know why is this book so often given in free access :/

the story itself and the world is very interesting, however the characters are not very developed and are extremely naive (the main heroine acts idiotically almost all the time. I thing that there is a solid base for a great story, but a lot of work needs to be put to improve it.

"of the fact"