so I've read a few of jordino fics even he has never really COMPLETED ANY, he still is a good writer so for my review here we go so.. - writing quality so far has been good with basically zero grammatical errors and probably one or two spelling mistakes of there is ANY and the story so far is really understandable. -story development have been amazing with our mc so far being one that i kind like and though his power hasn't really been revealed yet since I'm not counting that Walmart gamer system as a golden finger anyways i like how the mc hasn't just been handed powers like candy just because and instead realistically looked at all the options and realized that even with foreknowledge of the plot it won't be easy to just grab powerful fruits or learn the best techniques's but has to work to earn his place in this universe and I really like that. -Character design is good since not many people have been introduced due to not having enough chapters yet but the few introduced are good enough. -updating stability is where jordino an I are REALLY GOING TO HAVE PROBLEMS -world background well it's one piece an already pre-existing universe so not much to really build but the author really understands the in universe law so overall it's a pretty good read and you should give it a try though if the author does eff up I'll let you guys know and I'll drop a review peace out
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