Review Detail of HadesOnDrugs in Ramoshi The Last Senju
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So your idea is very good/unique but since naruto is based on Japanese culture you have to take that into consideration. In Japan people give very importance to hierarchy like senpai koi hai relation so in your story everyone feels like they are talking to people of the same age, like if naruto is 40 why is the mc talking to him like he is his brother. The characters speech doesn't sound like the character at all like shikamaru speaks in a lazy way in your conversation he feels like he is energetic. Chapters are short, events happening in chapters are short. So you got a lot of work to do, it's not like the other generic naruto fanfic but still u still got a long way to go.
Ramoshi The Last Senju
THAGOAT_82
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Will this fic contain a harem or potentially could Contain one ? Just wondering i only read harem fics XD
THAGOAT_82:Thanks for the input I will try my best to improve
CliffkunLolRekt:Will this fic contain a harem or potentially could Contain one ? Just wondering i only read harem fics XD
THAGOAT_82:This is not a harem or not planned on being one if it happens then maybe but not right now
CliffkunLolRekt:Will this fic contain a harem or potentially could Contain one ? Just wondering i only read harem fics XD
You're not looking hard enough if you think there is not enough harem garbage on this app. I'm personally happy that I don't have to see such trashy writing as frequently. But different strokes for different folks I guess.
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Bro i dont call non harem fics trash Why you calling harem fics trash then I understand you may not like the harem Tag but diffrent peaple like diffrent things i give Peaple who dont like harem fics respect so why Douse it seem like the antai harem sect is still insulting the harem sect like brah It is like a hit to my gut when i see the no harem tag yet i dont say anything negitive about it because peaple have a right to dislike the tag Hence i dont bash the antai harem sect So why is the harem sect not getting the same curtacy and respect Sorry i have had this greavence been building up for awhile now Had to mini rant
_Bruh:You're not looking hard enough if you think there is not enough harem garbage on this app. I'm personally happy that I don't have to see such trashy writing as frequently. But different strokes for different folks I guess.
I did say different strokes for different folks. It's just that we normal people (anti-harem sect) view your kind (harem sect) as our lessers for good reason. Whenever a harem is introduced, the quality of a story never gets better or stays the same in quality but drops. Plus it doesn't help that almost all harem lovers are proud degens.
CliffkunLolRekt:Bro i dont call non harem fics trash Why you calling harem fics trash then I understand you may not like the harem Tag but diffrent peaple like diffrent things i give Peaple who dont like harem fics respect so why Douse it seem like the antai harem sect is still insulting the harem sect like brah It is like a hit to my gut when i see the no harem tag yet i dont say anything negitive about it because peaple have a right to dislike the tag Hence i dont bash the antai harem sect So why is the harem sect not getting the same curtacy and respect Sorry i have had this greavence been building up for awhile now Had to mini rant
if you enjoy it good on you harem just isn't my cup of tea as i don't think any self-respecting modern women would accept sharing their man
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you need to hit the gym bro it will teach you to love yourself more so you won't feel the need to imagine a group of fictional girls loving you it could even help you get a girl irl to help you feel loved that's the only advice i can give to you
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I do love myself but i have a hard time feeling emotions from outside sorces There is a difference between loving yourself and the feelings of love you get directed at you when i feel them from outhers its extremely muted i also have muted feelings to some degree and have a hard time distinguishing my own emotions over all the harem Tag quite literally saved my life it pulled me out of a deep depression preventing me from suicide said depression was caused partly by my lack of feeling outhers emotions and many outher factors
_Bruh:you need to hit the gym bro it will teach you to love yourself more so you won't feel the need to imagine a group of fictional girls loving you it could even help you get a girl irl to help you feel loved that's the only advice i can give to you
one of the anime that pulled me from my depression from netflix out of many was tenchi muyo siries Tenchi muyo gxp war on gemar rosori+vampire Demon king demomu Heavens lost property and vandread as some good examples
_Bruh:you need to hit the gym bro it will teach you to love yourself more so you won't feel the need to imagine a group of fictional girls loving you it could even help you get a girl irl to help you feel loved that's the only advice i can give to you
CliffkunLolRekt:I do love myself but i have a hard time feeling emotions from outside sorces There is a difference between loving yourself and the feelings of love you get directed at you when i feel them from outhers its extremely muted i also have muted feelings to some degree and have a hard time distinguishing my own emotions over all the harem Tag quite literally saved my life it pulled me out of a deep depression preventing me from suicide said depression was caused partly by my lack of feeling outhers emotions and many outher factors
CliffkunLolRekt:one of the anime that pulled me from my depression from netflix out of many was tenchi muyo siries Tenchi muyo gxp war on gemar rosori+vampire Demon king demomu Heavens lost property and vandread as some good examples