Why does every character sound like they're Shakespeare......it's like I'm reading the script of a play.

I really want him to do that homelander speech infront of the crowd..... Like "...you guys should be thanking christ that I am who and what I am because you need me.... You need me to save you, because......I am the only one who possibly CAN."

Cursed spirit manipulaion is too busted...... I would recommend something like the 10 shadows type...... He will summon the beasts rinnegan could summon but as shikigami

With how well u are writing this story it would be a massive shame if you didn't explore the heian era as an arc......... 👀

Six eyes control of cursed energy allows gojo to have infinite cursed energy, his regeneration of cursed energy far exceeds his output..... So it's a bit unrealistic that he is running out of cursed energy as MC said in the chapter...... He might be tired but never be out of cursed energy.

Was that an NF reference in the middle👀...... The mind is a powerful place and what you feed it can affect you in a powerful way.

I was bloody fuckn right

Romance feels a bit like plastic and very unnatural/forced ...... 💀

"If garbage can compete with you.... Imagine what perfect will do.. " Straight up 🔥🔥

Its turning like every other dc marvel fic out there tooo much OPness and cringe..... Im droppping this. The first few were good but now....not for me.

One piece struggle of the weak Naruto child of chakra

So I'm a spider goddess,so what?

Bro u should have done that scene differently.... Like remember the guy who got to a million without lifeline then on the last question he acted tense and called his father just to tell him that he got the million and already knows the answer and he got it, a million... You should have used it here would have been awesome.

Thats good i thought u would go the revenge route of ian against sarah... Like put her in a ditch and forget about it but you did good with whole forgiving thing, a lot of people may not like it but you have my respect++ for it.

Maybe nerding out a bit after showdown but Intimidate cuts attack by 33%(one stage) not half.

If u are going for legendaries i think zygarde is the best option, the whole guardian dragon lore would be good to add to the story.

(A.n: Imagine it yourself, okay? I am not an expert in this kind of thing.) ... Ufff..... I'm feel u comrade

The romance... Not working for me mate. I feel like your exploring unknown territory with the romance, it feels like you don't have much experience writing the genre cause it feels forced and a bit cringe. The novels good though... Just don't spin it around the romance... It's just not good.

How bad must you be for even the fucking villains wants you dead for the greater good, as much as the heroes do. Apparently Amanda Fucking Waller bad.

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