It was good until the author decided to include religion and politics. Mc - I won't interfere in your regional wars/affairs 5 chapters later Mc provides the most advanced tech to only U.S for the war and decides to cosplay and angel of God for the americans ruined the story
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LIKEand you refuse to elaborate expecting everyone to wait not realizing your fic is nowhere near good enough to hook readers into that
Dragonspectre:And, did you expect the character to be rigid and not at all flexible. He took the initiative on his own after assessing the situation. He is not exactly looking to help the US win the war. There is more at play here than you immediately see on the surface.
Maybe. But, the point stands. It'd be impossible to reveal every bit of detail regarding the plot in a few chapters. Some actions make sense with the passing of time. If everything is revealed and explained in a few chapters ten I can just narrate the whole thing in five chapters and be done with it.
L_y_n_x:and you refuse to elaborate expecting everyone to wait not realizing your fic is nowhere near good enough to hook readers into that
Who is the partner of mc?
Dragonspectre:Maybe. But, the point stands. It'd be impossible to reveal every bit of detail regarding the plot in a few chapters. Some actions make sense with the passing of time. If everything is revealed and explained in a few chapters ten I can just narrate the whole thing in five chapters and be done with it.
I agree but sadly not many people on the internet are smarter than a fish, so you have to give some foreshadowing, especially when it comes to moves that don't make sense or seem f%&ked up
Dragonspectre:Maybe. But, the point stands. It'd be impossible to reveal every bit of detail regarding the plot in a few chapters. Some actions make sense with the passing of time. If everything is revealed and explained in a few chapters ten I can just narrate the whole thing in five chapters and be done with it.
Vex's take on the coming war is explained in the chapters. His take is that war is inevitable. He is merely exploiting an opportunity that presented itself to him. Of Course, it has unintended consequences which will be explored in future chapters. The next two chapters will give an idea of what those consequences are.
L_y_n_x:I agree but sadly not many people on the internet are smarter than a fish, so you have to give some foreshadowing, especially when it comes to moves that don't make sense or seem f%&ked up
what religion? the god of the marvel bible is a junkie with a head problem, and DC has a strong influence of the god of the bible, which is the presence
Elliot_Jackson:But religion is apart of marvel, whether you like it or not, besides most fanfics do involve religion, they just completely bash it, it is nice to have someone who is at the very least neutral to it all