honestly, just reading the first auxiliary chapter and the comments made me too lazy to read the story, seriously, you take something “normal” like “air manipulation” that a normal person would think of as something like Avatar and turn it into this?? completely ridiculous, you made so many virtually invincible powers that I don't want to read. please take the criticism seriously as I am being sincere and not just trying to say bad things. think again when you do this part about powers for characters, your idea was ok for the most part, but the rest we can't say the same.. remembering that I didn't read the rest of the story because only the first assistant made me give up on the idea of following this and went so far as to bring me in to do the analysis
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The fact that u consider air manipulation normal is your problem because I don't, because if one man had that power in this society u won't call it normal anymore. Now I get that some people are like not good doesn't make sense and it doesn't but was the point of my story for it to make sense, no! I just wrote this thing for fun, thanks for the input I'll try to take it seriously but honestly I don't think I will but appreciate
My intention was not to denigrate your work, it's just my view, some things really didn't make sense, whether they were “possible” or not. and surely no one would think it was normal to have that power in this society because no one has powers here, right? but in MHA there must definitely be a few hundred with something similar
ImAGhost:The fact that u consider air manipulation normal is your problem because I don't, because if one man had that power in this society u won't call it normal anymore. Now I get that some people are like not good doesn't make sense and it doesn't but was the point of my story for it to make sense, no! I just wrote this thing for fun, thanks for the input I'll try to take it seriously but honestly I don't think I will but appreciate
Guy u read the auxiliary chapter and I said I will see how to integrate it into the story it means u haven't even read the main story o. I just copied the wiki and posted it there, you should actually try reading the story not comments else it's just bias
Great_maid_Oni:My intention was not to denigrate your work, it's just my view, some things really didn't make sense, whether they were “possible” or not. and surely no one would think it was normal to have that power in this society because no one has powers here, right? but in MHA there must definitely be a few hundred with something similar
If thats your view than you should write an orignial novel instead of fanfic. In an original setting you can make whatever power system you want without any limitation but fanfic by difinition are bound by the world and rule of the original character, it make no sense of air manipulation to be so rediculous in a setting like mha where most population have different superpower with each having a clearly defined limit which takes alot of hardwork and will to break through and go beyound plus ultra. By your logic ochaka would be a cosmic level god figure that control one of the four fundamental power of creation and Momo might be the incranation of god almighty itself. see how rediculous it gets when you decides to break the balance without logic or reason.
ImAGhost:The fact that u consider air manipulation normal is your problem because I don't, because if one man had that power in this society u won't call it normal anymore. Now I get that some people are like not good doesn't make sense and it doesn't but was the point of my story for it to make sense, no! I just wrote this thing for fun, thanks for the input I'll try to take it seriously but honestly I don't think I will but appreciate
