ImAGhost
Yo I love reading and writing stories though I don't know a lot of stuff but hey I'm learning.
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I don't know, it just going like that
The fact that u consider air manipulation normal is your problem because I don't, because if one man had that power in this society u won't call it normal anymore. Now I get that some people are like not good doesn't make sense and it doesn't but was the point of my story for it to make sense, no! I just wrote this thing for fun, thanks for the input I'll try to take it seriously but honestly I don't think I will but appreciate
Well it's more like a shield of barrier where at that point no oxygen is allowed to pass through but it doesn't affect the others as it's a shield not some barrier blocking the flow of oxygen at least that's the logic. Doesn't make sense but well its's a fanfic not much makes sense
nice one
Alright I'll consider ur words carefully as I continue writing, thanks
Thanks for the advice
Isn't the end result of a story to make MC break out of his shell and turn from the lazy boy to that guy that is lazy but will work hard to protect those he loves? I don't want mc to be arrogant that's for sure
have u read this fanfic cus he did first internship with Brainstorm
Oga this was chapter one and I'm a novice of course I'll not be perfect
sorry😅