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JadePanda003
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2021-10-24 11:46

To celebrate getting 1k collections, I'm here to give myself another review. It's more like a self-reflection of sorts. Writing Quality- Now, looking back, I definitely could have done better in some cases like how the conversations inside the group chat progressed. Some chapters like that made me felt satisfied by what I wrote while reading while others made me frown in annoyance. My grammar should at least be readable while but it's a far cry from those excellently written novels. Story Development- The story is still in its beginning stages so nothing really exciting or dramatic happened. The story's pacing is quite good in my opinion, with no major time skips except for when I skipped the childhood phase. The story's now its first Dimension Travel so there's that as well. Character Design- Nothing could be said here, I think. I took characters from different novels and tried to emulate their unique personalities as much as I can. Updating Stability- It's being updated everyday for almost a month now so it's a five star! Haha. World Background- In terms of this one, I think I never really delved too deep into it as I felt that there wasn't really a need to. It's a much more advanced Earth than ours, what more should I say? However, I might further elaborate when it comes to some cases like in another world. All in all, I'm pretty satisfied with how this story is shaping out to be. No stressful events, not much in terms of drama, just a fluffy Slice of Life story that is paired with Game Elements and Dimensional Travelling experience. To those who wants to read this thinking that there will be serious developments, I'd suggest that you should turn around and look for something else. I didn't start this book to stress myself and the readers by making us all go through a roller coaster of emotions. I made this because I want to relax and take my mind away from the stress of work, even for a moment.

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Amon_Angel_of_Time
Amon_Angel_of_TimeLv4

after reading anilationmaker i cant take these type of fic serously its not that it was bad but due to the protag being so caotic i became destisized with these still like them tho

JadePanda003
JadePanda003Author

Oh, you've seen that ff? I actually never checked it out because I saw some bad reviews about it when it arrived to the, if I'm not mistaken, KonoSuba Arc? Anyway, I just want to know why people want to take fanfictions such as mine seriously when it's main theme isn't something that should even be remotely taken seriously. I don't get it. Haha.

Amon_Angel_of_Time:after reading anilationmaker i cant take these type of fic serously its not that it was bad but due to the protag being so caotic i became destisized with these still like them tho
Amon_Angel_of_Time
Amon_Angel_of_TimeLv4

its understandable the dude was crazy and there was also the fact the kono arc was half the book somewhat dont worry its finnished i had even reread the book at one point alot of us fear the tittle konosuba (44) it got that bad the rest was good tho

JadePanda003:Oh, you've seen that ff? I actually never checked it out because I saw some bad reviews about it when it arrived to the, if I'm not mistaken, KonoSuba Arc? Anyway, I just want to know why people want to take fanfictions such as mine seriously when it's main theme isn't something that should even be remotely taken seriously. I don't get it. Haha.
Amon_Angel_of_Time
Amon_Angel_of_TimeLv4

word of advice the readers start getting anoyed after chap 20 for a world maybe more but only if it isnt dull

JadePanda003:Oh, you've seen that ff? I actually never checked it out because I saw some bad reviews about it when it arrived to the, if I'm not mistaken, KonoSuba Arc? Anyway, I just want to know why people want to take fanfictions such as mine seriously when it's main theme isn't something that should even be remotely taken seriously. I don't get it. Haha.
JadePanda003
JadePanda003Author

Uh-huh, noted. If I'm actually gonna make it quite long, I'll slip in an arc about the girls to change the atmosphere a bit.

Amon_Angel_of_Time:word of advice the readers start getting anoyed after chap 20 for a world maybe more but only if it isnt dull
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