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Amus_Sama
Amus_SamaLv43yr
2021-10-29 08:18

I love the story so far, it’s too short to go fully in depth at this time but the main characters interactions with the others is fun to read plus I just love novels or fanfics that take place in games while this one takes place in two as of now. I am overjoyed to see Only Sense Online getting some love as I never see it anywhere yet it’s so good. Can’t wait to see how the interactions with the original Bofuri cast will happen, and I really want to see the mc reach maple levels of OP. Pochi and Tama were wonderful touches to the story it’s as if they’re the little mascots of the chat group and you just gotta love seeing their shenanigans. The upload schedule leaves nothing to be desired it’s quick enough to mantain my interest in the story. Hope you keep this up author it’s loads of fun, I was half tempted to write something mean just to F with you but meh.

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JadePanda003
JadePanda003Author

Hahaha. I think WN'S gonna delete it for me anyway if you do end up writing some poorly written mean review. Just earlier, a review was deleted and I didn't get to see what it meant since it's written in binary language. About the BOFURI character interactions, I have to say sorry in advance since this arc will be quite short lived as I was really rushing for that fantasy world to come into play(I say short but it would last for around 10 chapters or so? I'm not sure). Anyway, there's lots of events that will come in BOFURI so I didn't feel the rush to write a whole arc about it(There's a few chapters planned for the girls only in BOFURI but that's about it for now). Regarding Only Sense Online, I think it got overshadowed by SAO. I've actually never seen a VRMMO novel other than SAO and Infinite Dendrogram get an anime adaptation.

Amus_Sama
Amus_SamaLv4

Tis truly a pitiful thing, not even Sally? And regarding vrmmo anime the notable ones that come to mind besides what you mentioned are Quanzhi Gaoshou (The Kings Avatar) and Log Horizon. I’m not sure wether to count ones where the mc is transported into game worlds like Overlord but I’ll just not.

JadePanda003:Hahaha. I think WN'S gonna delete it for me anyway if you do end up writing some poorly written mean review. Just earlier, a review was deleted and I didn't get to see what it meant since it's written in binary language. About the BOFURI character interactions, I have to say sorry in advance since this arc will be quite short lived as I was really rushing for that fantasy world to come into play(I say short but it would last for around 10 chapters or so? I'm not sure). Anyway, there's lots of events that will come in BOFURI so I didn't feel the rush to write a whole arc about it(There's a few chapters planned for the girls only in BOFURI but that's about it for now). Regarding Only Sense Online, I think it got overshadowed by SAO. I've actually never seen a VRMMO novel other than SAO and Infinite Dendrogram get an anime adaptation.
JadePanda003
JadePanda003Author

Sally will be in a chapter, for the tutoring and to start some 'friendship' if you know what I mean. Other than that, I didn't really go too deep with it, ending it before the first event comes into play(that's where the girls are going). I'll surely put some chapters about it, most especially about the Guild Wars, but not for now since I want to expand the squad by one more.

Amus_Sama:Tis truly a pitiful thing, not even Sally? And regarding vrmmo anime the notable ones that come to mind besides what you mentioned are Quanzhi Gaoshou (The Kings Avatar) and Log Horizon. I’m not sure wether to count ones where the mc is transported into game worlds like Overlord but I’ll just not.
JadePanda003
JadePanda003Author

By one more, I meant one more group of weird girls.

Amus_Sama:Tis truly a pitiful thing, not even Sally? And regarding vrmmo anime the notable ones that come to mind besides what you mentioned are Quanzhi Gaoshou (The Kings Avatar) and Log Horizon. I’m not sure wether to count ones where the mc is transported into game worlds like Overlord but I’ll just not.
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JadePanda003
JadePanda003Author

To celebrate getting 1k collections, I'm here to give myself another review. It's more like a self-reflection of sorts. Writing Quality- Now, looking back, I definitely could have done better in some cases like how the conversations inside the group chat progressed. Some chapters like that made me felt satisfied by what I wrote while reading while others made me frown in annoyance. My grammar should at least be readable while but it's a far cry from those excellently written novels. Story Development- The story is still in its beginning stages so nothing really exciting or dramatic happened. The story's pacing is quite good in my opinion, with no major time skips except for when I skipped the childhood phase. The story's now its first Dimension Travel so there's that as well. Character Design- Nothing could be said here, I think. I took characters from different novels and tried to emulate their unique personalities as much as I can. Updating Stability- It's being updated everyday for almost a month now so it's a five star! Haha. World Background- In terms of this one, I think I never really delved too deep into it as I felt that there wasn't really a need to. It's a much more advanced Earth than ours, what more should I say? However, I might further elaborate when it comes to some cases like in another world. All in all, I'm pretty satisfied with how this story is shaping out to be. No stressful events, not much in terms of drama, just a fluffy Slice of Life story that is paired with Game Elements and Dimensional Travelling experience. To those who wants to read this thinking that there will be serious developments, I'd suggest that you should turn around and look for something else. I didn't start this book to stress myself and the readers by making us all go through a roller coaster of emotions. I made this because I want to relax and take my mind away from the stress of work, even for a moment.

Orange_Car_Slave
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SR_2027
SR_2027Lv5

Writing another review cause now it has enough chapters to know how many stars should be given. ************ Writing quality: Perfect. No major grammar or spelling mistakes. Story development: Story starts up good. You gets to know his background and his past easily and along with summary of what had happened. But the chat group appears too suddenly but it can be say that it appears at the start of the canon(probably). Then the further chapters are developed pretty good. The author had added some AU but it's ok, it doesn't affect the character behaviour... *Sign* it's pretty hard to give review without spoilers... Character designs: Character designs is simple and on to the point. The author is able to potrait the characters according to their original behaviour, which is pretty hard even to professional authors... Updating stability: Best. You gets chapters daily, which is best. Author you have my respect to write the chapters so fast and accurate. World background: Here's the problem. The author had took a great risk and even won the prize. Background is based on a novel which might not be read by most of the readers but this also creates suspence. Usually chat ff have characters from famous animes like dxd, Fate/, or Yosuga No Sora(used frequently). But author had took risk making the background completely of different novel that might not be read by many readers. This is pretty astonishing... ________________________ Now what are you waiting for? Go and read the ff immediately.

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