Review Detail of Leigh_Green in Starts as a Vampiress, Ends into a Villainess

The story started narrating a vampiress celebrating her 100th bday getting out of the coffin. This is one interesting intro. And she looks like a young girl despite her age. The writing is good and understandable but as the chapters progress, I got confused along with the flow of the story. It has a lot of errors that need to be fixed. The pace is good but the transition of the story needs clearing. The updates were accordingly done. The characters were described and mentioned. The world setting hasn't been detailed. Overall, the novel has great potential. Just ensure clarity of its flow for better reading.