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This is a beautifully written tale of the werewolf and the witch. The first five chapters are enough to put me in a hook. Can't wait for more. The writing style is great. I like your flow and style of writing. Done with ease and comfort. It just keeps you going to the next page. Although the development of the story isn't yet revealed as much. I'm holding my breathe for the what's-gonna-happen-next. The characters have been introduced with the witch in full description but with the wolf still to be described in full flesh. And the setting to be defined as well. But, all in all, this is a very nice read.
The story started narrating a vampiress celebrating her 100th bday getting out of the coffin. This is one interesting intro. And she looks like a young girl despite her age. The writing is good and understandable but as the chapters progress, I got confused along with the flow of the story. It has a lot of errors that need to be fixed. The pace is good but the transition of the story needs clearing. The updates were accordingly done. The characters were described and mentioned. The world setting hasn't been detailed. Overall, the novel has great potential. Just ensure clarity of its flow for better reading.
It's a fun read about a supermodel who has to get over after dumping her boyfriend who impregnated another woman after a one-night stand. And what's more entertaining here is the fact that her ex-boyfriend's sister is now engaged to her best guy friend. Ah, the confusion. Writing is good but needs to be edited. The chapters were added simultaneously five days ago. The pace of the story is just fair enough. The characters are described but not described in details except for Justin. Setting is located in Nova City. Interesting and intriguing.
It's a nice opening of the werewolf story. Awaiting for the next chapter.