i have the shortest attention span especially when reading😂😂
This is a very intriguing novel. I can see that why it is a worthy read. As for tips to make it a bit better...elaborate/specify/describe the details of 'Winston's clothes, the place etc. Cause from what I know about male novels, they tend to be detail-heavy on world building. But be sure to not put too much, and still focus on the events/scenes. Other than that hats to you 🥰🥰🥰
The part of Winston in the beginning was the foretellih of the future or one of his memories?🤔🤔🤔
Parts that are missing? I would like more detail on that (on discord/or here). Thank you for reading my work!!! Thank you for the compliments!!!
Natria did she made a distraction tactic sacrificing herself to save her child and husband. Bold move!
Novus is in denial that his kids are dead.😭😭😭
ahhh!!! a scorpion?!!?
OMG!!! My god the intensity of the start had me hooked! Leia seems like a headstrong, intelligent and resilient FL. I'm maybe 3 chapters in but I am not removing this from my library! I have theories of what might happen so I'll see if I can get a bullseye of one of my predictions! More power to you author! Don't stop writing!!! This is a MUST READ!!
pick-locking takes skill though in real life!😅
it's a sedative!
Ouch! child abuse!!
Mr Aldolpho feels like a wife-beater!
That escalated quickly!😅