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i have the shortest attention span especially when reading😂😂

2019-01-02 JoinedPhilippines
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  • authortinnnnn
    authortinnnnn1mth
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    This is a very intriguing novel. I can see that why it is a worthy read. As for tips to make it a bit better...elaborate/specify/describe the details of 'Winston's clothes, the place etc. Cause from what I know about male novels, they tend to be detail-heavy on world building. But be sure to not put too much, and still focus on the events/scenes. Other than that hats to you 🥰🥰🥰

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    Darkness Of Hell
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  • authortinnnnn
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    The part of Winston in the beginning was the foretellih of the future or one of his memories?🤔🤔🤔

    A man appeared in the middle of deserted land, it was dark everywhere. Half-moon was flickering in the sky, it's the only source to see what's around.
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    Darkness Of Hell
    Fantasy · man_k
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  • authortinnnnn
    authortinnnnn1mth
    Replied to man_k

    Thank you very much. 🥰🥰🤗🤗🤗

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    Starts as a Vampiress, Ends into a Villainess
    Fantasy Romance · authortinnnnn
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  • authortinnnnn
    authortinnnnn1mth
    Commented

    🕷🕸🕷

    "There is no need to worry, Your Majesty," Amon assured, giving him a small bow. "I am used to it, and I will make sure that I will use my power with great responsibility."
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    Death's Lover
    Fantasy Romance · MysticAmy
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  • authortinnnnn
    authortinnnnn1mth
    Replied to Libby1
    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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    Starts as a Vampiress, Ends into a Villainess
    Fantasy Romance · authortinnnnn
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  • authortinnnnn
    authortinnnnn6mth
    Replied to AngelLily

    Parts that are missing? I would like more detail on that (on discord/or here). Thank you for reading my work!!! Thank you for the compliments!!!

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    Starts as a Vampiress, Ends into a Villainess
    Fantasy Romance · authortinnnnn
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  • authortinnnnn
    authortinnnnn6mth
    Commented

    Who's Avia?🤔🤔🤔

    "Son, sharing always reduces one's grief. If you feel comfortable, you can talk to me, all should be confidential. Avia's word." the woman assured. Her eyes with genuine kindness, the grittiness and the soft-spoken tone of one trying to help reverberated through Flohelm's heart. He was hesitant, those memories were painful. The lady caught Flohelm's expression.
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    The Rise Of Natria The Tyrant
    War&Military · Cultureshock_poet
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  • authortinnnnn
    authortinnnnn6mth
    Commented

    Natria did she made a distraction tactic sacrificing herself to save her child and husband. Bold move!

    She leaned closer, kissing her husband for the final time. Natria stood up and ran in the opposite direction. The bandits noticed her; they followed with a chase all while Natria shouted, "You can do this!" Every second or so, his voice became fainter and fainter. Flohelm was left alone now. Everyone he cared about was gone. Vahana, Nocus and finally his wife Natria, they all sacrificed themselves. In the depths of his mind he drowned; would he let all those sacrifices go to waste?
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    The Rise Of Natria The Tyrant
    War&Military · Cultureshock_poet
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  • authortinnnnn
    authortinnnnn6mth
    Commented

    Novus is in denial that his kids are dead.😭😭😭

    "They are sleeping, right? Let me get them. Boys, wake up." he shouted. He tried to move towards the carriage, but Flohelm stopped him.
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    The Rise Of Natria The Tyrant
    War&Military · Cultureshock_poet
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  • authortinnnnn
    authortinnnnn6mth
    Commented

    War military settings isn't my cup of tea but the world building is quite good but the names of the characters, places, origins etc are very difficult to remember. Stop info dumping, I'm begging you.

    Ch 2 Goodbye My Children, My Love
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    The Rise Of Natria The Tyrant
    War&Military · Cultureshock_poet
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  • authortinnnnn
    authortinnnnn6mth
    Commented

    ahhh!!! a scorpion?!!?

    Her two children played in the garden, unknown of the troubles that plagued the nation, for them catching a butterfly was a much more interesting. They ran about the garden, falling hither and thither. Suddenly a cry came, Martin, the younger of the two, had his foot stung by a scorpion.
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    The Rise Of Natria The Tyrant
    War&Military · Cultureshock_poet
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  • authortinnnnn
    authortinnnnn6mth
    Commented

    no mercy🤬🤬🤬

    "Kind souls? I might as well guide you to heaven then." said the master nonchalantly, as he drilled holes of bullets through the three.
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    The Rise Of Natria The Tyrant
    War&Military · Cultureshock_poet
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  • authortinnnnn
    authortinnnnn6mth
    Posted

    OMG!!! My god the intensity of the start had me hooked! Leia seems like a headstrong, intelligent and resilient FL. I'm maybe 3 chapters in but I am not removing this from my library! I have theories of what might happen so I'll see if I can get a bullseye of one of my predictions! More power to you author! Don't stop writing!!! This is a MUST READ!!

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    Sold To An Alpha
    Fantasy Romance · AngelLily
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  • authortinnnnn
    authortinnnnn6mth
    Replied to Demigod_of_All

    Aww! Such a sweet review! Thank you for reading it I'm glad you enjoyed it😘😘😘

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    Starts as a Vampiress, Ends into a Villainess
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  • authortinnnnn
    authortinnnnn6mth
    Commented

    I'd admit that maybe Mr Aldolpho had gone too far but, again Leia if she had not fought back to her father...sober or not sober. She wouldn't be in that situation!

    Ch 3 Stop Me Now
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    Sold To An Alpha
    Fantasy Romance · AngelLily
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  • authortinnnnn
    authortinnnnn6mth
    Commented

    pick-locking takes skill though in real life!😅

    She inserted the pin into the lock and began to twist it in different ways. She placed the lock close to her ear and attentively listened to the sound the pin produced inside of it. She did this for almost an hour before she tiredly brought her aching hand down. That was harder than she thought.
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    Sold To An Alpha
    Fantasy Romance · AngelLily
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  • authortinnnnn
    authortinnnnn6mth
    Commented

    it's a sedative!

    A young nurse pushed Leia, who was unconscious in the wheelchair, into a private room and laid her on an iron bunk with a small bed on it. She injected something into her body and stepped outside after she was done, then locked the door and left.
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    Sold To An Alpha
    Fantasy Romance · AngelLily
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  • authortinnnnn
    authortinnnnn6mth
    Commented

    Ouch! child abuse!!

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    Sold To An Alpha
    Fantasy Romance · AngelLily
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  • authortinnnnn
    authortinnnnn6mth
    Commented

    Mr Aldolpho feels like a wife-beater!

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    Sold To An Alpha
    Fantasy Romance · AngelLily
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  • authortinnnnn
    authortinnnnn6mth
    Commented

    That escalated quickly!😅

    A wicked smile formed on her lips, and her eyes narrowed into a thin line. She positioned the bat near the window of the Lamborghini packed on her right side and her smile switched to a warm one. "Dear father, I've been waiting for you."
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    Sold To An Alpha
    Fantasy Romance · AngelLily
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